| "Kagome's Spirit Detective Cousin" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: blah_girl_bored2death On: October 10, 2003 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you might want to work on where you put the little things that mean someone's talking. It's really confusing the way that you have it now. Jsut a little thought for the moment. And you might want to work on your spelling as well. You spelled Yusuke's name wrong. It has another "u" after the "s". Jsut thought I'd let you know. But other than that, it's pretyy good.
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Reviewed By: FiReAzUnA On: October 10, 2003 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
um you need quotations and yuske is spelled yusuke there are many other errors,but who am i to judge lol.
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Title: Hey!
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! wow! i LOVE this story so far! well, umm for hte pairing, id put inuyasha and kagome, but make her like hiei for a while is my suggestion....well, thanx for making such a good story, and plz update soon! Ai-Lani
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Reviewed By: Inu_kagome_nut [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic so far hurry up and update lol I vote Kag/Inu Heie is cool and all but way to short lol keep up the good work ^_^
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Reviewed By: Akki Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon and I hope it is hiei/kagome please!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blue cresent moon On: October 06, 2003 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHEN IS YOUR COMPUTER GOING TO WORK I LOVR THIS FIC WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA please update sooooon. *_*
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Reviewed By: Rosie BB On: October 05, 2003 15:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This sounds really intersting!! I REALLY want you to continue!! It sound s sooooooo cool!! p.s. yes, you really need to put in quotations.
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Reviewed By: youki kagome On: September 29, 2003 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like your storie can you email me when you up date thhank's to email me go to Youkikagome@aol.com thank you
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Title: PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 01:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE AND IS THIS GOING TO BE A KURAMA/KAGOME OR IS THIS A HEIE/KAGOME?????
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Reviewed By: Hieilover1982 On: September 27, 2003 14:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue. You have better grammer and spelling and combining INuyasha and Yu Yu Hakusho really helps with the style of writing.
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Reviewed By: ~*Mimi*~ On: September 22, 2003 20:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story PLZ UPDADE!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blue cresent moon On: September 20, 2003 21:51 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GOD...PLEASE UPDATE SOON I'LL BE REALLY MAD IF YOU DON'T. I'm saing please. |
Reviewed By: giftedone01 On: September 15, 2003 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great!! i cant wait to see what inu yasha will do when he catches kagome!!! Oh by the way is Heiei and kagome are going have a fling!!! PEASE update soon |
Reviewed By: Blue cresent Moon On: September 15, 2003 16:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How long will it take you to poot up ch 4. |
Reviewed By: icy On: September 12, 2003 15:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
why don't you write any more??? i like this fanfic of yours!! |
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