| "Kagome's Spirit Detective Cousin" Reviews/Comments [ 98 ] |
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Reviewed By: Anime Nut On: July 18, 2003 23:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
*falls over anime style* Way to leave a person hanging. You have a good thing going here, however, I'm not trying to be meen here, but I think you better get someone to read these over before you post them. There are quite a few mistakes in this cahpter, although I haven't read them all yet, but I think you should consider it. Also, if you don't mind my saying, please make longet chapters. Very well done, Keep up the good work. ^^ |
Reviewed By: me On: July 18, 2003 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Neko-yashaccs [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 22:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleas continue.. I like it I rilly,rilly do ^_^
I under satand when some ones talking but it would be easer to read thuo.... |
Reviewed By: Neko-yashaccs [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 22:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pleas continue.. I like it I rilly,rilly do ^_^
I under satand when some ones talking but it would be easer to read thuo.... |
Reviewed By: Sumechick15 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 14:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this fanfic! It's cool. I feel bad cuz you can't put " in your story though, I know that feeling. For awhile I couldn't use the L button on my keyboard. That was a bitch! Anywayz! Good story, keep it up! And uhh...can you somehow get Kenshin in the story? I'm sorry! I just luv that story too! Well keep up the good work, (OMG that sounded so damn corny) |
Reviewed By: Jvirgo90 On: July 13, 2003 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is great keep writin |
Reviewed By: Inu-kun185 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
The story is great, but you need to work on your spelling and grammer. You need to put quotation marks when the people are speeking, it's easier to understand. But besides that the story is great! Continue.... |
Reviewed By: dranged fan fic lover On: July 12, 2003 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you do great crosses so I would like you to do a inu-kensin please please please |
Reviewed By: reneea On: July 12, 2003 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you are soooooooo evil! I thought it was a new chapter.I really love this fic. so update SOON please |
Reviewed By: AnimeGirl On: July 12, 2003 17:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
The story is interesting and good so far! Please update soon. But can you put quotation marks when someone is talking, is kind of confusing without it. |
Reviewed By: Midnight Fox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2003 14:51 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please continue.
It is very good.
Midnight Fox |
Reviewed By: Yendtra On: July 12, 2003 14:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Me agian, I forgot to ask if you could put the "talky marks" so that it could be less confusing when another character starts a conversation. |
Reviewed By: Yendtra On: July 12, 2003 14:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
The story is going great and you better (not to sound bossy) get the next one up, I like it that much. Wow! Oh and not to be mean or anything but I only noticed this once so maybe is was just once, but Heie isn't spelled like that, it's Hiei. Sorry fav character, you know how people can get when it comes to there fav character. But to make you feel better It was GREAT and I can't wait for the next one. You're a good writer keep it up. Till the next chapter....
Bye
P.S. try to make the chapters longer, if that wouldn't be to much of a bother. |
Reviewed By: bise b On: July 12, 2003 13:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, good fic. i like it. just a few comments. the chapters should be longer and also when someone is talking you should put what they say inside of quotations. ex: "Hey Kagome. How are you?"said Sango ok? and thoughts should be inside of apostrofies. ex: 'wow, her smile is making my heart beat so fast...' thought heie. ok? you get it? its just kinda confusing. alright? bye bye |
Reviewed By: TheOneACR On: July 12, 2003 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So far the three chapters are great. I love reading fanfics. Inuyasha and YuyuHakasho are my favorite animes. So this is really interesting. Please keep on, besides it's summer so have plenty of time to write. All in all, it was superb,so please keep writing. ^_^ |
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