| Reviewed By: alfa star  On: July 13, 2003 16:37 CDT Rating(s):
 Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
 Overall Rating: 10 of 10
 hey im likeing  the story although it didnt really give that much info about the story. but it sounds pretty good to me! i cant wait for the next chapter! write sooon
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