| "Beautiful Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Arcana On: November 18, 2003 12:56 CST
Comment/Review:
This was a beautiful piece of work. I feel as though you got Seishirou's feelings down quite well.
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Reviewed By: Kira Sakuya [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 18:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Actually, I didn't notice anything specially horrendous about the grammar or the spelling. I like it. |
