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"Gundam Day Care" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ]
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 Title: LUV IT!!!!^_^
Reviewed By: Riley Maxwell [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 11, 2003 17:58 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story so much! I've read it about four times already! Thank you for revewing my story, you're like one of my favorite authors and I almost didn't believe that you reviewed! Thank you, and I love your stories! I look foreward to more! -Riley Maxwell
 Reviewed By: Kirara_Girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 02, 2003 18:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY!!!!! ANOTHER UPDATE!! i can't believe that Wufei accually asked someone for help! Duos help!!! @_@ hope everything goes well for him! *hint,hint* ^_~ UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!
 Reviewed By: Kirara_Girl [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 21, 2003 23:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHOO-HOO! HURRAY!! HALLELUYAH!!! YIPPY-SKIPPY!!!!! you finally updated! ^_^ i love what that kid said to Wufei on the phone and i can't wait for the big date! i hope it goes well! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOON PLEEEEASE!!!! or i shall send my army of evil GARDEN KNOMES on you!!! MUAHAHAHA*hiccup*HAHAHAHAHA!!!
 Reviewed By: Kirara  On: August 23, 2003 14:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I've gotten all excited to read what happens next. DON'T STOP!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!! Your last chap. was really neat, i would never be able to snap my bones back in place. The way it sounds in the anime is so gross.

Wufei still needs his own cuddle-bug!!!
 Reviewed By: P Feilds  On: August 20, 2003 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really like this fic, it is just a nice sweet story line
 Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 01, 2003 16:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi! its me again.....awwwwww! thats was so cute! I loved the house hunting part. The wedding was cute too, if a bit short. Now all you need is Wufei to be happy! I love this and i can't wait til you update! so do so soon! ^_^; boy i'm bossy.......... oh well! Happy writing! ^_~
 Reviewed By: gwing fan  On: August 01, 2003 08:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
i think something should have gone wrong because saying something at the wrong time just isnt any good try doing something like pricilla running up to yuy or duo and tripping over and breaking her leg or something so the wedding had to be prospond
and then one of them has an affair or has second thoughts about the wedding and doent turn up.
 Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 26, 2003 00:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwww! davids little cuddle bug. how sweet! sorry it short, glad u update so often! ^_~ tata!
 Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 25, 2003 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Dang! I think i was drooling too........ yum yum eatum up! *devious twinkle* Wufei had another nosebleed and Quatre fainted! LOL! i love this. Write more when u can, I'll be here. till then! ^_~
 Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 21, 2003 00:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
flames? are u kidding me? that was cute! and i can't wait to see how Duo makes Wufei's nosebleed! * gleeful look * hope Wufei gets some sort of a girl in here and it would be awsome if u wrote a story about the kids when ur done wit this...... and i'm getting head of my self. Hopefully your muse will hit u with the large inspiration thingy of its choice. and nevermind, inside joke. but really... u have to continue! this is great! update soon! Tata! ^_~
 Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 20, 2003 20:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
*happy sigh* and now this after that completely adorable last chapter, that was awesome. i can't wait to see how duo makes wuffie's nose bleed tomorrow. heee i love this fic.

Mara
 Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 17, 2003 10:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
I thought the thing with David and Prisilla was cute! And yes, Wufei does, definately, need some lovin. Really like the way this is goin and can't wait for more! ;P I like stories about Wu-chan! I'm such a dork....... *sighs and shakes head* Oh well! This is funny too! Verrry good! I'll be waiting for the rest! Tata!
 Reviewed By: Riley Maxwell [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 16, 2003 14:30 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG that is sssoooo cute! David must have a thing for Priscilla! I wonder if Tro and Quat's kids will get gundam too? Keep writing this is a good story! Hook Wuffie up with someone so he doesn't feel so lonely...or insane.
 Reviewed By: wren_legacy [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 16, 2003 11:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhhhh! i love it! Talkative heero and trowa and their kids! Beyond cool! Its just.... this fic is so cute! ^_^ I just can't help but get excited! Update soon! This is such a great fic and I can't wait to see where it goes! Keep it up! Happywriting! ^_~
 Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 16, 2003 10:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
awwwww, that's so cute!!!!! you kno i never did like the pregger fics, where duo and heero have a baby, but this one is cool, focusing more on the having a child aspect. i think you should write more with priscilla and david as active characters, it'd be really interesting to read about the extent of her skills... also, what's going to happen to wuffie? he needs to be happy! and are you going to write anythign that reinforces duo and heero's relationship? and how are you going to write the timeline for this? are you going to write it up til priscilla is old enough to get duo's deathscythe? so many questions!

Mara
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