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| "Here I Am" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: SnowyBlackOwl (Not logged in) On: September 07, 2004 14:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
To put words behind my rating, I'll put it simply: you have ROOM TO IMPROVE; not that your writing is bad, of course, but some points are just missing. I can understand if you -still- haven't seen and/or read Season Two of Magic Knight Rayearth, but, well, this is different. The plot 'Innouva gets revived to kick ass,' well, that's a plot I like. 'Innouva captures Umi, revives Nova, and somehow links those to revive Zagato,' that I like too. O_o'' But what I'm trying to tell you is that improvement may not be needed too much, but improvement CAN be made. ^_~ If I've taken too much of your time, then, forgive me. Nonetheless, this is still a wonderful piece of fanfiction, and please do continue it. I've read and reread and reread it for the nth time, and I'm still waiting for your updates (of which I'm sure will be awesome and awe-inspiring.). You have to continue. And, well, here's another thing I forgot: 'Innouva revives Eagle and turns him into one of his generals.' That plot I really don't like too much. You see, if Eagle (in the series) was to turn bad, well, none of the things would've happened that've happened if he wasnt' who he was, get me? I'm just hoping that in time, Eagle'll finally find out who he really was, what he really was, and what were the things that made he who he is now. If you stick to Eagle not finding out WHO he is, well, its up to you. I really can't change that. But PLEASE - improve and update are the only words that I can use. | Title: This better be continued.
Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ur a really gud author and all that, and ur writing is positively delicious! I'd like sumore of all that gud and tasty gudness! Preferably more fluff between the ppl. Yeah.
| Reviewed By: raine19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2004 08:07 CDT
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at last i saw a umi-clef fic. . i love you for that!!!!!! continue this ok?
| Reviewed By: Blue Umi On: December 30, 2003 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only started getting into Rayearth fan fic and this story is the best by far!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait till the next chapter
| Reviewed By: Watw On: December 30, 2003 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've only started getting into Rayearth fan fic and this story is the best by far!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait till the next chapter
| Title: I'M Still Reading!!! ^_^
Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT JOB!!! I'm enjoying this! It's got a lot of. . . Err. . .hype I guess, but I like it! Yay for you! | Reviewed By: Inferno_66 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2003 12:02 CDT
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Hey! Great job! I think you REALLY should finish this fic. It's really great, pretty dramatic, but that's what's so addicting! And then, you got this entire, "Innouva returned to kick ass" thing going on. It's fabulous!! So, write on! And. . . if you have writers block, good luck! | Reviewed By: Sab - Clef Lover On: August 13, 2003 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was totally awesome! I loved it! I highly doubt any of my own MKR fanfics even compare. I hope to see you continue on with this tale. Plus, I can flame the reviews if you decide not to! :)
~Seika (Sacred Song) | Reviewed By: Timber Wolf [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is pretty good! You have to continue this! |
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