| "Sweet Delirium" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Koorime Rose On: September 08, 2005 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Who cares if it's nothing completely new? It's still fluffy and adorable! ^-^
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Reviewed By: SirPsychoSexy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 15:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very very nice detail...and very nice characterization...
Until the end. Shiori...she would be fairly shocked, me thinks (as in, "I didn't see it, it'll go away"). Or COMPLETELY oblivious. And I don't think Hiei would be caught dead saying "I love you"...his style would be to nod and go, "Hn". Or something like that.
Oterwise a very good one-shot. ^^ Especially for the time of day in which you wrote it...
PS I have no intention of being interpreted as a flamer.
PSS I would like it if you R and R'ed my fics...^^
-SirPsychoSexy |
Reviewed By: Hawk On: July 26, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it is a good plot although it is a little hard to follow. I had to read it a couple of times to get what is exactly going on. But keep up the good work, i did enjoy reading it. |
Reviewed By: Trina On: July 18, 2003 00:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
it's so fluffy and sweet. I think hiei worring to much though kurama can take care of himself. well i like sweet things. the ending was weird though |
Reviewed By: kuramas-Girl On: July 17, 2003 22:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the detail and emotions thaat you described. The fire baby, made me laugh a bit. Overall its great! |
Reviewed By: inatasha [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it when I read it it made a picture in my mind I really liked that |
Reviewed By: purplechaos04 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2003 14:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
The detail and imagery of this were very explicit, this was really well-written. I wish my writing ended up like that. It is fluffy, but the Kurama being ill added some nice drama. The beginning of the story, the dream, was especially good. One thing confused me- when did Kurama's shirt fall off? "blanket only half-covering his naked torso" Hmm... The ending didn't suit it though. It was strange for the mother to react so calmly to that. Hmm |
