| "Kaxian Tendo" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Jarkota On: January 09, 2005 21:00 CST
Comment/Review:
It's original; a rarity in the Ranma fic-vierse. Would be willing to read more.
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Reviewed By: R80 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 23:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Figured you combined both versions of the Fusion into this, and now there's an interesting problem: how will Tofu and Mousse react to this girl made of their love interests? The spelling was a bit off here and there, but that's minor stuff. I like this fic. |
Reviewed By: YamaiDaiken On: July 21, 2003 12:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was really cool, and I don't think I've read another fic like it. It puts a great new perspective on both Kassumi and Xian Pu (AKA Shampoo) *drops mature act and makes puppydog eyes* Now could you Please continue? Ne? Ne? |
Reviewed By: dennisud [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2003 21:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has a great premise. but one chapter a story does not make. Lets see how this develops.
dennisud |
