| "Once Upon a Day" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: Administration, Mediaminer.org
Reviewed By: Fanilia [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2004 22:31 CDT
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This is to inform readers of this fiction that the author here on Mediaminer.org is the same author as on FF.net. Please do not flame these works.~Fanilia, Administrator, Mediaminer.org
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Reviewed By: DMYamiyugi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2004 16:03 CDT
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heh, you better thank that Soul Bound site, cuz that's how i found and read your story. It's really cool and I've always wondered how Yami and Yugi would act with a child. Please continue it! ^^ Like lots! ja ne! ^_~
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Reviewed By: Pooka228 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2003 10:20 CDT
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Yumi is finally talking to Yami. I hope she has a good first day at school. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: *Elizabeth*Marie*Rose* [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 22:57 CDT
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This is a very interesting story. Its summary piqued my interest quite nicely, and I was not disappointed in the chapters! An unusual situation presented in fanfic form! When Yumi was first introduced, I thought her name was a cross of Yugi and Yami... And you're right, we do learn something every day! Keep up the good work! I love the story! |
Reviewed By: Pooka228 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 16:26 CDT
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Great chapter. I like Yumi, she is very nice. She understands a lot for such a little kid, but I can understand that, especially because when I was her age I acted much like her. I hope she will learn to trust Yami and I'm glad she learned to trust Yugi. Please update soon. |
Reviewed By: Sakura tenshii [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 15:23 CDT
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This is really great UPDATE@!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shadow-Specter (not logged in) On: July 19, 2003 18:42 CDT
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this is very good so far. Your idea is very original and unigue! please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: Rowan Morona On: July 18, 2003 20:11 CDT
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Not bad. I think you've got something good here. i can't wait to see what happens when they get back home. Will Yumi speak to Yami or give him the cold shoulder? I look forward to finding out. Good job. |
Reviewed By: AnimeAna [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2003 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original and thoughtful idea that you have: a young child confused about living with "parents" who are homosexuals. I look forward to more of this story. :D This is a great start, and you can do a lot with this idea. |
Reviewed By: Pooka228 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 12:42 CDT
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I have to confess that I don't like Yaoi or Yuri or anything like that, but this story is really good. I never read a story like this one. Please update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next. |
