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Reviewed By: Pyrokitsune On: November 07, 2003 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEEE this fic but WHAT ABOUT THEIR FUTURES!!!!!!! Will Kaiba be alone forever or will Yami come back!! Keep up the good work. (WRITE A SEQUEL!)
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Reviewed By: Dark_Wind [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 11:02 CST
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Sad. *Sobs.* Poor Yami. Well, at least Simon got what was coming to him. Evil, evil creep.
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Reviewed By: blue-ice15 On: October 31, 2003 06:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this chapter was so sad *sniff* but i liked it! pplleeaassee!! countinue!! you just can't leave it like that. please excuse me i need to get some tissues
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Reviewed By: Naru-chan On: September 27, 2003 18:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know I've been waiting and waiting for a good fanfic like this, man you got to hurry and finish it. Man, if this rating went up to 100 or 1000 you get them both,*sighs* man I relly got to relax, any how hurry and get on with it to the next chapter, I want to know what happen to Yami.
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Reviewed By: person again On: September 07, 2003 14:57 CDT
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yeah! I have figured out how to use the font color and all that stuff! Thank you for your patience. I will appreciate it if you are understanding with my stupidity -_- |
Reviewed By: some person again still experimenting On: September 07, 2003 14:52 CDT
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Reviewed By: some person On: September 07, 2003 14:51 CDT
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Hello. I am one of your reviewers. I am using this to try to figure out what font color and all that stuff is. i love your story! |
Reviewed By: I am dogsruleW! On: September 07, 2003 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If the rating went to one hundred, you would get the whole one hundred! This story is unbelievingly good1 I can't wait until you continue the story, and I hope that it ends happily! It had such a surprising ending, you are a wonderful author. I was completely surprised at how it ended, that Simon was bad. This has to be my favorite story on this site. |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Yasha On: September 03, 2003 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh you are an evil creature making me wait lol but great job i love this fic!!!!! you have a great writing technique that keeps the story going at a good pace without leaving out vital details to the story. great job, update soon! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: dum mud [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plzzz continue!!!!!!!!! I love this story!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Dark_Wind [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 09:41 CDT
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*Squeaks.* No! You have to write some more now. I LOVE this story!!! *Sits waiting for next chapter.* |
Reviewed By: Leila15rose On: August 10, 2003 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sweet... I love this fic! Please add one more chapter! Please? |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Yasha On: August 07, 2003 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gah! No! No! No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SOON!!!!! you left me hanging AGAIN!! OMG i'm going to have a heart attack!!!!!!O.O i love your fic though! ^-~ |
Reviewed By: Kitty-Yasha On: August 04, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!! this fic was great!!!!!!! I can't believe you said it wasn't good. ITS AWESOME!!! i love you you've managed to get a so used idea (the whole vampire thing) and change it to make it even better!!!!! That's awesome!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!! your killing me with suspense!!! You update and i'll review again! please update soon ::Begs:: ^-^ |
Reviewed By: leila15rose On: July 21, 2003 19:37 CDT
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I'm glad that you could get that next chapter out! It was great! Keep it up! :D |
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