| "Crescent Mirror" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: rekino On: August 19, 2003 04:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wah~~!! you are so good that im jealous of you :D~
you really are good though~ and i reckon you have what it takes to be an author.. umm neway.. hope you continue~! |
Reviewed By: SteelHeartrose (On ff.net) On: August 19, 2003 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I think the 10's explain themselves. The 10 for the spelling and grammar beacuse of the fact I noticed very few throught out the story. I love it and I can't wait for you to update I hope it is soon. I've never seen this fic on ff.net, but I shall look for it. I like the way the story is going and that you pace it so well. Most people, including myself, like to skip the early years and jump to the teens. I never knew how to write about the young years that's whay I skipped ithem anway back to this I hope you update soon. and I fell sory for The princess of Mars. I also really love that you use the names of the god's and goddess from Latin and Greek History. Apollo the sun god
Ares the god of war and of MArs adn of Course Selene of the moon more often know as Luna, and Artimas sometimes know as Diana, but she is more often then not refered to as the goddess of the hunt second to the moon.
Sorry I love mythology especially the planets any way keep up the good work and never let the bad affect you more then the good.
Also I loved the line
"I see no grapes, so there is not wine!" update soon
~*STEEL*~ |
Reviewed By: Rekino On: August 13, 2003 06:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah!! You're so cool! You rock! Keep it up! Post your fic on Fanfiction Net. Coz I'm sure you'll get more reviews if you do!
jao~
Rekino |
Reviewed By: Sparky On: August 11, 2003 22:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic is great! I can't wait till you get the next part out...it's very well written and planned. Keep the chapters coming! |
Reviewed By: aj8031 On: July 19, 2003 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this story because it's so unlike other stories that have been posted on MediaMiner.org. It is written well, is very original, and makes me want to read more. The only thing that makes the story look kind of odd is how it appears. It looks very scrunched up (at least on my browser). Good job and please write more. |
