| "Obsession" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Kodiax On: July 17, 2005 12:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's a great story. I hope you will write a new chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Kodiax On: July 17, 2005 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's a great story. I hope you will write a new chapter soon.
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Title: Wow!!!
Reviewed By: Raylin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow,this is a really great fanfic...keep it up Undercover HamHam Lover!
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Title: whyd ya stop?
Reviewed By: moogle64 On: July 03, 2004 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first off, STFU jayna ya stupid perverted bitch!!!!!!!!!!!! (dumbass), any way whyd ya stop updated im a loyal subject to your works and i keep visiting to see if you updated yet. though i cant understand y, ill still keep visiting until the special moment comes that youll update your kickass stories, hope to see more soon. P.S. jaynas a super bitch, super bitch nah nah nah nah nah!! >:D
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Reviewed By: Sapphire Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2004 19:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is better than other stories I've red like it on FF.net, to many limitations over there. Keep on writing
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Reviewed By: hamtarolover On: December 27, 2003 20:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story, i just don't know why your not writing anymore. your really good with these stories and i hope to read more of it. oh i almost forgot Jayna, beastiality or however u spell it, its a way of life. and after all, this is a HAMTARO fanfic and i really don't think yaoi is normal at all! i find it offensive that you think that yaoi is normal. oh and remember WRITE MORE!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Crisp On: November 30, 2003 12:57 CST
Comment/Review:
scince when is yaoi normal? anyway, i thing the story is pretty tight, but, you never update.
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Reviewed By: The-Orange-Clown [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 02:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um...Jayna, Bestiality is when HUMANS have sex with ANIMALS. Not animal/animal.
And Yaio is not any more normal than bestiality, because niether were ever intended. |
Reviewed By: xan_nova [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good and I am always going to be a fan of yours. |
Reviewed By: Jayna On: July 27, 2003 01:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH YOU??????? THEY ARE HAMSTERS! THEY DON'T FUCK! TRYING WRITING SOMETHING NORMAL! LIKE YAOI! BEASTIALITY IS NOT KOOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HAMSTERS DON'T FUCK FOR FUN! THEY EAT THEIR CHILDREN AND YOU ARE SICK!! WRITE SOME GOOD GUY ON GUY GONE NUTS AND HORNY STORY! NORMAL! |
Reviewed By: The Orange Clown On: July 22, 2003 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way your writing has improved, I hope you add to your Erotic Adventures fanfic as well. But this one is going in a good direction thus far. I sort of agree that it goes over Fanfiction.net material, but they have strict limitations. Think of this as a way to exploit more oppurtunities for the story. Such graphic descriptions are a bit mature for the average FFnet reader.
But as I said, I love your writings and style, This could be better than your other fiction if it explores the relationship and is a little less raunchy. (But I still like the other one ^.-) |
