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| "All It Takes" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2004 11:20 CDT
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Ooh, I loved it! ^^ Perfect with the angst! You're great at writing this kinda stuff!
| Reviewed By: Super Fire Inu On: December 23, 2003 00:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this fic. It was sweet and short. I couldn't find anything wrong with this like, your spelling and grammer was verrry, verry good.And so was the style of writting. I really like this fic. ^_^
| Reviewed By: Kriss On: July 31, 2003 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote a really great story. It is very easy to read, and flows fairly well. It moved a bit too fast though, and had almost a choppy feel in some points. This topic has been done before (to death in fact), but I think you wrote it well, especially with the tons of fics covering "Yami or Yugi love eacother but don't want the other to know". I would love to read another chapter, and know what exactly is going on with Joey, and see a little bit of fluff between Yami and Yugi. Hey, if you're feeling really inspired you could write a spin off/sequel of sorts where Yami and Yugi help Joey with his problems. Beware, though, because that topic has been done, in a way, as well, however I am sure with your creativity you could find an angle to make it original. If you have any questions, or whatever, or just plain want to chat you can email me at krisnkriss@hotmail.com. Again, I do think you are a very good author. I hope I wasn't too hard on you, and I do hope you continue writing. Ja ne! ^-^x
Kriss | Reviewed By: Kriss On: July 31, 2003 14:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote a really great story. It is very easy to read, and flows fairly well. It moved a bit too fast though, and had almost a choppy feel in some points. This topic has been done before (to death in fact), but I think you wrote it well, especially with the tons of fics covering "Yami or Yugi love eacother but don't want the other to know". I would love to read another chapter, and know what exactly is going on with Joey, and see a little bit of fluff between Yami and Yugi. Hey, if you're feeling really inspired you could write a spin off/sequel of sorts where Yami and Yugi help Joey with his problems. Beware, though, because that topic has been done, in a way, as well, however I am sure with your creativity you could find an angle to make it original. If you have any questions, or whatever, or just plain want to chat you can email me at krisnkriss@hotmail.com. Again, I do think you are a very good author. I hope I wasn't too hard on you, and I do hope you continue writing. Ja ne! ^-^x
Kriss | Reviewed By: FairysGift On: July 29, 2003 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't you put the translations into the story instead of writing it in japaniese cos i can't understand it! >_< Anyway i think you should try making this one into a story. Like using joey's secret as a plot.Obviously Yugi could either find it out in the end or he could still remain clueless. its totally up to you whether you want to use this idea or not. i'm only making a possible suggestion. Good luck! | Reviewed By: Katya-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the way you wrote this. It gave me the impression of a movie trailer, for some reason ^.^;...the italic words "All it takes..." seemed to me like the things someone would say while the images were going...but never mind.
I really liked this. You should post this on FanFiction.net, goodness knows that there aren't many good fics out there anymore...
Excellent work. I really liked it. | Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 19:35 CDT
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That was pretty good. If you want to do more, I'll look for it. But I think it's fine as a one-shot as well. Good job. | Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so sad T_T..... BUT SO KAWAII! ^_____________^!! | Reviewed By: goldaries13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 14:03 CDT
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I like this and.... To be honest, it`s so good I can`t decide whether you should continue it! I mean, if you continue it, it would be good, but it`s so sweet on it`s own!
*thinks for a minute*
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!! MOST DEFINITELY!!!!!!!! |
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