| "The Darkness inside Sparkle Returns" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Yami Bijou
Reviewed By: Yami Bijou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hamha eveyone, I am Yami Bijou, Yami Hamtaro's friend. I just wanted to know that I am the one who created Alice, so those who liked Alice, you should thank me for making her up! Hamtaro won't stay dead forever..
Hamtaro: I WANNA MEET YUGI!! |
Reviewed By: Yami Hamtaro [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2003 09:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm glad you like my fanfics! Thank-Q for the reviews! |
Reviewed By: - On: August 03, 2003 19:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Um, I couldn't help but notice the typo on ch.4, where you said Sparkle turns evil. Judgin' by what I seen of her in the show, shouldn't the title be Sparkle turns MORE Evil? .... Bad joke, I know. Anyways, great fic! Can't wait to find out what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Mirisha On: August 02, 2003 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was good, I'm just not sure if younger kids should read it, if Hamtaro's dead. Perhaps putting a warning or something up would be good(Or maybe you did, and I missed it ^^"). Anyways, this was a very interesting story, and I enjoyed reading it allot. It had it's small twists and turns that makes a story good, great work. |
Reviewed By: PandaChan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 15:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I have a quick question. Are you going to still continue writing this fanfic? I think thats neat you have a made up ham-ham with a kewl name...i have a made up ham-ham too but she sucks! keep writing! |
Reviewed By: PandaChan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2003 23:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're such a good writer and I'm so jealous! I liked it when spat came and said pfpth as you can tell I like him. I got scared when sparkle killed the one hamster and you detailed all the blood. I see you alot on hamtaro sites...hint hint. keep up your excellent writing! =3 |
Reviewed By: Hamtaro [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story Yami Hamtaro! Keep up the good work with your fanfics! |
