| "Thinking About Forever" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Nightscream On: October 09, 2003 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey i love this fic, very original! Keep up the good work! I can't wait for the next chapter...we have Victoria in with Van and his people and Veronica with Folken and his Group but where did the 3rd group of people end up (the rivel gang)? Anyway i look forward to more chapters real soon!
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Reviewed By: Billy-Joe-Bob On: July 26, 2003 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good so far. Keep it up. It's pretty well written in my opinion. I like Veronica's fight with Dilandau in the first chapter and the proloug kinda gave me a better idea about them. |
