| "flames of a beginning" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just stumbled on this wonderful story. it made me cry. of all of the stories i've read, this was the only one that had that effect on me.
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Reviewed By: Kchan88 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really good fic!!! It's really creative and original. I really love the parts where Kenshin is watching over Kaoru. They're such a cute couple!!! Please update!!!
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Reviewed By: MissTeya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 09:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very interesting fic so far. I don't like how you switch from first to third person and you really don't need the author's notes in the story. It kind of detracts from the plot. The plot itself is wonderful so far. You have a great imgination. Are you going to further explore Yahiko's part in this accident? She didn't try to get out the locked door, so will he continue feeling guilty? Also, does this take place after the Christian Arc? If you've it, you'll know why that is important. On a side note, maybe you should post this at fanfiction.net. You would probably get more reviews. At any rate, keep up the good work. I am intrigued to see where you will take this story. MissTeya
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Title: Update please.
Reviewed By: Yarisha The Fox Demon On: March 14, 2004 15:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update it was a great fic. ~Ja ne~
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Reviewed By: hellagood#1 On: November 02, 2003 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great fic!!! i cant wait for the next update so that means you need to update soon!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tsukix33 On: October 30, 2003 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic!!! i wanna know the rest! update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ash On: July 29, 2003 13:43 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a good story. Please continue. I would like to know what happends. Thanks ^_^ |
