| "The Darkest Tournament" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitsune gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 18:12 CDT
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Okay take of the rose whip and rose whip thoen wheel!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 18:10 CDT
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can I be in the Tasugi Team and be thier captain?? Please!!!
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Reviewed By: Kitsune gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 18:09 CDT
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Gender: Female Age: 2050 Race: fox demon Hair: black hair adn black fox ears Eyes: purple Height: 5,6 Clothes: a red one sleeved shirt and dark blue flared low rise jeans Weapon: flute (she uses it to summon any dead person because she can control them),ninja stars,katana,rose whip Attacks: silent scream,rose whip thorn wheel,summoning of the dead,and sword of death Personality: likes to fight,kind,tough fighter,smart,sly Reason to Fight in the Tournament: To get revenge on Yoko,even if she liikes him and he knows it Friends/Family watching the Tournament: Kayko,Yukina,a whole lot of demons,and Shayla,her sister Name: Kitsuna
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Reviewed By: Lonely_Destiny [to lazy to sign in] On: February 29, 2004 15:23 CST
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could you update pleasee?
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Title: Change to Angelus
Reviewed By: Angelus [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 18:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Angelus's personality has changed to a more dark and mysterious type.He only talks to people he respects like his team members and fighters who can acctually beat him in an honorable duel.He only entered the tournament to test his strength against the worlds strongest fighters and to also bring back his dead mother whom was taken from him by a shape shifting demon a year earlier.
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Title: The Pantheress
Reviewed By: Sayona On: October 26, 2003 19:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
pretty good ficcy, I think I entered a charcter....not sure....but I think your doing fairly well....
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Reviewed By: Rune2003 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 06:29 CDT
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Name: Hitomi Kawamura
nickname: Rune or Ru-chan(strictly by friends)
Gender: female
Age: Looks 15 but is really in the 350-400 range
Race: fire-based fox demon
Hair:Black w/blue streaks
Eyes: silvery blue
Height: 5'8" 1/2
Cloths: Black
Weapon:sword that can transform into a larger sowrd
Attacks:~Petals of fire~they are petals of fire which creat a protective barrier around her
~Hells fire~the sword transforms and starts to glow red.She swings it two times in the shape of an X and two red energy waves shoot towards the opponent.The opponent then is consumed in flames .
~flame whip~She consentrates her energy and forms a red whip in her right hand in which she then uses as a weapon.Upon contact with the opponents skin they are deeply cut or sometimes even cut in half.
~Dance of the Blue Dragon~is an attack which combines the flame whip and petals of fire.She starts to do a dance while the petals surround her her hair goes completely deep sea blue, in both hands she forms her flam whips she starts to spin and the barrier disapateswhile the whips shoot out and pratically mince meat her opponents.
~Draons Eye~her sword will glow blue and she can revive any creature or heal anyhting with one swipe of her sword.
Personality: VERY Sarcastic,tough,cocky(at times)nice,Has a MAJOR crush on Kurama,major tomboy,is a honor roll,has elegant fighting moves,very strong, has very keen senses 'cause she can detect where/who her opponent is by their scent, has human feelings except when pissed she will turn really stioc and sadistic...Except when it is her friends then she just chases after them and punch them tackle them to the ground, sit on them and yell at them. HATES being called stupid or fluffy((becuase they saw her right after she woke up and her haair was like major afro it was so frizzy))She like to challenge strong opponents..When no one can find her she is most likly either training or in a windowsill reading or writing a poem.She is also a master swordsman and a master in Martial arts.
Reason to Fight in the Tournament: To show everyone she can because for years she was called weak, teased, and beat up and she couldn't fight back for that would show she is not human because she had to live in the human world with her older brother..
Friends/Family watching the Tournament:Hakoutomari(aka Hakou) her annoying overprotective older brother, [wind demon]Rath her best friend who whenever she comes in contact with a weapon she goes on a rampage and beats everyone up till Hakou can knock her out. [water demon]Kai, her best male friend who has major crush on Hitomi but she has no clue.He is also a great theif act alot like Hiei.
Team:Nameta team |
Reviewed By: Green-Lantern [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 15:32 CDT
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Nice so far. When will the other teams be in the story? |
Title: Fox Mistress
Reviewed By: Fox Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2003 13:31 CDT
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Love this story!! It's great so far. Up date soon!!!!!!! ^_^ I misspelled the annoucer's name It's:
Armorage |
Reviewed By: Sidharthavicous On: September 05, 2003 12:01 CDT
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Name: Ranjit
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown
Race: Demon but looks like a normal Indian human
Hair: Black and waist length. Long beard tied into a tight braid hanging to his ribs.
Eyes: Brown
Height:6'6
Clothes: Jeans and tee shirt. Tennis shoes. A short cord dangling from the belt loop of jeans. Gray wrap around his head to keep his hair contained.
Wepons: Goor Khat-cord used for strangling
Attacks: Speed a little slower than Hiei's, Spirit Goor Khat or Spirit Cord which is solidified spirit energy he uses to strangle enemies, his fists.
Personality: When not strangling people as sacrifices to the goddess Kali he's actually pretty friendly. Will kill but will not shed blood for any reason since it's against his religion. Will let a person live of they have even a tiny cut since he cannot sacrifice them. Always willing to make friends with people who put up a good fight.
Reason to Fight: A Thug, meaning a follower of the Hindu goddess of death Kali. If he wins he plans on wishing for a bloodless death for everyone in the stadium except himself as an offering to his goddess. Also because he has a fun time fighting.
No friends or family watching and will be on any team that'll have him. |
Reviewed By: Fox Mistress [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 18:46 CDT
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Okay Here's an annoucer for you:
Name:Amarage (I just watched an Armitage movie and i'm obsessed with making names like Nyomi Armitage)
Race: How about fire demon
Hair: Black with red streaks
Eyes:purple
Clothes: A black and silver, sleevless Catsuit with the back missing, and black boots.
personalit: LIkes blood and gore, tries to crack jokes while she's annoucing th fights. |
Reviewed By: Noodle Thief On: August 01, 2003 15:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
***me being to lackadaisical to sign in***
lol, there's gonna be alot gothic people in the Darkest Tournament, just seeing so many characters wearing black ^_^ Then all these Katanas, what a show, update soon ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Green-Lantern [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 20:49 CDT
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my characters girlsfriends name is Tana to |
Reviewed By: Angle Blade [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Angle
Gender: Male
Age:14
Race:Human
Hair: Silver
Eyes: Ice Blue
Height: 5'6"
Clothes: Black cargo pants, black tanktop, black leather gloves, and a black leather jacket
Weapons: None
Attacks: Thunder Strike (Series of lighting strikes)
Angle Blast (Blast of energy that disenegrates every thing in its path)
Prsonality: Calm, Collective, doesn't talk much
Reason to fight: To beat Yusuke
Family/ Friends: None
Team: Medamrai |
Reviewed By: Darkside574 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 20:09 CDT
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Added attack to Angelus
Dragon King Mode:When Angelus is beaten to within an inch of his life his rage bursts forth and spikes begin to rip out of every part of his body and deep black scales appear around him.The transformation finally ends by his face strecthing out and becoming dragon like while a long 12 foot tail grows behind him.In this form he has no spirit energy but his sheer brute strength is unbelieveably overwhellming and his scaled hide makes it hard to damage him but not imposible. |
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