| "Abandoned Home" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: Cahpter 3(4)
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 11:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. Update soon. Can't wait to read who is following them, Naraku probably and what they find out from Inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: kagome789 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2007 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You Should make the chapters longer.Good story though
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2004 16:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: wackoramaco87 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 19:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
very nice beginning! i think you should make the chappies longer though! =D plz keep on updating soon! p.s. will you have a happy s/k ending??? ^_^
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Reviewed By: Lirael [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 17:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a very good start! I like the story line but I think you should maybe go into more detail.
I really like the beginning however.
Maybe go into more depths about his family, why he is so cold and distant.
I can't wait to read more!
Update soon please! |
Reviewed By: Sesshyangel On: July 26, 2003 09:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! that wasn't bad! grammar was okay, didn't pick up any major mistakes. Very brief though. Update soon! |
