Reviewed By: Sum Yung Gai On: July 27, 2003 06:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, I didn't check throught he Grammar & Spelling specifically but I have it on good authority there are some errors, so I went with above average but not perfect. The style of writing is very cool, but I think every writer can evolve and improve in this area. It's a fanfic, so it isn't remarkably original by definition... but Jill is new, and extremely interesting. It is an absolute hoot to read, hence the high marks in the enjoyment. And, kind of like Style, everyone can improve in some ways.
But yeah, this story is awesome! Keep it up! Or else... you know what. |
