| "All in Good Time" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Scyggy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2006 01:40 CST
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Wow. Few one shot lemons have this kind of skill and character development, it's truly impressive. Alucard, the evil bastard, was portrayed perfectly alongside the caring for his master, and Integra's internal conflict over the issue was both interesting and amusing. Good show, sir, good show.
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Reviewed By: Seraphtrev On: August 02, 2005 02:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A truely gifted fanfiction. I do hope you continue with this plot.
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Title: It's us again... ((ohhh dear))
Reviewed By: AnimeFan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2005 03:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nine 'cause I'm mean like that. :P [[c]] I would have given it a ten... ((a)) Anyway, I remember reading this one. In homeroom. K-chan printed it out... held me at gunpoint.... I'M EXAGGERATING!!!! [[c]] O.O You're gonna get me arrested one of these days!! Not before I get you... *glare* ((a)) But yes, I do think you captured the characters perfectly. (That can't POSSIBLY be the word I tried to find!!) [[c]] Aren't you glad I made you read that? ((a)) We're on a diet, we're leaving beind almost 1000 characters... [[980 until I decided to comment.]]
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Reviewed By: Patchwork Muse On: August 17, 2004 03:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
In all truth, this is one of the best AxI fanfics I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Characterization was very IC, and I could imagine Alucard and Integra in this situation. I've always felt Integra needed to be taken by storm, and, in a way, Alucard did just that. By not giving her a chance to consider what he was doing, he broke down her defenses and left her with little to hold as a shield. Alucard's sense of cruel humor, I think, would extend to tormenting his master. Even if it was simply to show that although she is his master, Alucard is her monster only by choice. I have -serious- doubts that anyone managed to capture Alucard without his permission, express or otherwise. Perhaps their relationship would begin with something akin to rape, but I feel it would progress further than that. Alucard's grudging admiration for Integra's strength of will is evident in both anime and manga. Even if this began as simple revenge, I think Alucard's wanting Integra for more than he uses Seras.
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Reviewed By: Sensoo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^____________________________^ That was quite enjoyable. Great characterizations.
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Reviewed By: teteiforever2002 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2003 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! That was fantastic! You let those two difficult charakters interact very good. Please write more!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: :D On: August 30, 2003 23:04 CDT
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write more please. |
Reviewed By: Stella195 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 01:43 CDT
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Wow! Thanks for a great AxI fic! I really loved your descriptions of Alucard - they were beautiful and original, very well done! I hope to see more Hellsing stories from you ^_^ |
