| "Now is the time for Family" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Veggie_Luva_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
jeez, you HAVE to update! i wanna see where this is gonna go!!!! its such a good fanfic! i can't even try to imagine raditz's hair as a super saiyan! ^^
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Reviewed By: PrincessKatreena On: May 04, 2004 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hope you get over your writers block. Good luck. This story is realy good so I'm looking foward to the rest. Bye Bye LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Tigger Babii On: November 06, 2003 18:54 CST
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Shouldn't Raddtiz fine sumone? Put a lil romance in there. have bardock and King vegeta beat the crap out of hucule cuz he uis very annoying in my opininon. i would love to see him get his a$$ beat! Anywayz...that is pretty much all i have. Keep up the good work! It's a good story!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: November 02, 2003 17:22 CST
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I think another way you can get more reviews on the FF.NET site, is if you turn off the switch that blocks anonymous reviewers. One girl finally turned it off on her account a few years ago, and she got more reviews and good suggestions from the anonymous ones than she did before.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: November 01, 2003 18:23 CST
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It would be so funny to read about the saiyan's reactions if Hercule was introduced and started to put on his usual act of being the greatest.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: October 30, 2003 18:57 CST
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Great job. I'd like to see Vegeta and his father train Bra even if it's just to teach her how to defend herself and learn how to control her inherited power. Maybe someone should get Bulma to ask Bra herself if she wants to be trained, and if Bulma's answer in her decision is to protect her from the risk of getting seriously hurt, then someone should tell her that they would treat her accordingly and that everything you do has an element of risk involved but they accept those and still do it anyway.
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Reviewed By: Tigger Babi On: October 29, 2003 06:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love ur fan fic! Keep going with it. Is Radditz gonna find sumone to b with? Wut about Bardock and King Vegeta?Wut about bringing the Mom's back too? Wutever u choose will b kool tho. Update soon please!
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: October 28, 2003 03:36 CST
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This is really cool, keep going. I hope you write a chapter about Vegeta's father getting to know his grandkids and daughter-in-law.
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Reviewed By: tracey3 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry Im not very good at reviews but here it goes. I am not a writer nor would I ever even consider it but I know what I like. I think your writing technique is very good and it is easy to read unlike some. Your storyline is a nice change. I do find myself looking almost everyday for a new chap. I do think you are a very good writer. thank you
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Reviewed By: Silver Queen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 03:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great I loved reading this!! For the last bit shoulnt it be all FIVE limbs intact? he still has his tail right? Any way Gokus introductions where funny and the whole Pan thing really made me crack up.
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Reviewed By: Mwhahaha Hater On: September 28, 2003 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok well i don't share his creepy ass enthusiasm but yes please do continue this fic... it ain't half bad.
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Reviewed By: Mwhahaha On: September 21, 2003 00:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
See now this is what I'm talking about in a fic. Stick to the good subjects and you'll be fine. Re-write episodes of the show... and well you're screwed! |
Reviewed By: Mephostopheles On: September 20, 2003 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good stuff. Keep going. If you quit... i will find you. Mwhahahaha |
Reviewed By: Nutin' On: September 18, 2003 07:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think the story is great1 i would have never thought of sumthing like this! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: kitkat On: September 17, 2003 22:50 CDT
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hell yes! you should continue for sure. i didn't read the new chapter yet but i'm answering to your request in the summary. I think you should continue because thera are lots of people who like a lot these stories where family interact, i'm one of these. ^^
if this review apear more than once it's due to problems when i hit "submit" button. this is the fourth try. |
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