| "Oh No!!!" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Kirara_Girl On: August 03, 2003 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is sooooooo cute. I can tell it's going to get better if you keep writting. I wonder whats making those foot noises. ^_^ PLEASE CONTINUE!!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: PandaChan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 15:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is soo good!! Keep writing more and watch out how you spell some of the words. =3 |
Reviewed By: the_friendly_void On: July 31, 2003 20:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! I really like your fic. It's so cute. I honestly think, apart from a few spelling errors, this fic has a a lot of potential. Don't give up on it! |
