| "Ryuichi Blue" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Amazing story
Reviewed By: Spellcasterz [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ryuichi Blues is truly excellent! I absolutely love it. I always thought that Ryuichi hid behind a mask and that something bad had happened to make him this way. I love your portrayal of him. Ryu-chan needs all the love he can get and I really hope that maybe Tohma can give it to him. I sincerely hope that his lover will be Tohma. He seems to genuinely care for and understand him. RyuichiXTohma will always be my most favorite pairing in the Gravitation series. The only obstacle is Mika really. Things would work out much better if Tohma and Mika cared for each other only as caring friends who had been betrothed by their parents. Or if they had a deal to be married for a certain amount of years before being allowed to get a divorce. Oh well. I hope that you will write another chapter because I want to read what happens next and I want to know who you will choose to be his love. With that said, I'll just say please update *cute puppy dog eyes* plleeaaasssseeee? With cherries on top? Sprinkles? Everlasting adoration? You choose. Ja ne, Spellcasterz
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Reviewed By: Na (Draechaeli) On: August 02, 2005 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great beginning! Is it a Ryuuichi/Touma fic? (That's like one of my fav pairings!) You should update soon I can't wait to find out if he tells Touma or not! ~Na
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Reviewed By: CuteCat11 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2005 03:56 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this! I wish u would make a OC for him though cause i like K and Tohma to be with their wives, Judy and Mika and Noriko is married so OC the best bet and if you need ideas i'm here as long as u update this amazing fic!
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Reviewed By: dragonflower1 On: November 14, 2003 07:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your characterization of Ryuichi. Something along those lines must have happened to him for him to behave this way. He DOES need someone to love him - and soon. Not Tohma, though, he's too selfish. Well-written. Nice flow. I'd LOVE to see you take this further.
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