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| "A Flare of Dragons" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] | Title: Agh, Darn It.
Reviewed By: Halig On: July 25, 2004 14:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'd seen this on Aphrael's site and hoped it wasn't abandoned, but I guess it has (been nine months since it's been updated). You two are extremely evil for that, by the way. Well, I guess I should just start by saying that I really love what exists of this story, hence the enjoyment factor of 10. I think the spelling and grammar rating speaks for itself as well (can't mistake what that means). I gave you a nine on the writing style because I really liked it, but I give no one a 10 in writing style (you have to make SHakespeare look bad for that from me. A nine is still damn good). The originality/creativity rating, I thought it was a very creative story, but I took off a point because the savior of the world thing is done alot, but that's not big enough of an unoriginal thing to knock off more than a point. Ah, guess I know not to check back every other day for updates now. *sigh* Well, I still think you two are evil for abandoning this, but am glad you got this far. As a note, I really like the way Taichi and Koushiro were portrayed in this story the best. It's fun watching the two of them interact. Well, on the one in a million off chance you ever decide to update, let me know please? *puppy eyes* My e-mail is elverzik@yahoo.com. Thanks and bye!
| Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I could've sworn I've reviewed this before... Anywho, you've got a great fic going. I hope you can add another chapter soon!
| Reviewed By: Flair Desjarnes On: October 09, 2003 23:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Awesome McAwesome! ^^; I loff you guys SO much, and my brain nearly exploded when I found out that you collaborated ;) Engaging and original, as usual. I can never seem to *stop* reading your fanfiction when I start. Which isn't necessarily a bad thing, now is it? ;) Spectacular work, lovelies!
| Reviewed By: Ashna [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 12:52 CDT
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This was so great! I'm adoring this fic. Hell I adore all of your fics. XD
You two keep at it!! | Reviewed By: Tarr'res On: September 11, 2003 02:07 CDT
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It's great, your writing is always good. But you've gone on about everyone else's looks but Ken's. Aren't you gonna let us see how all this leather and weaponry makes him even sexier than originally? What are Daisuke's impressions of his...um...beauty? What about Tai? It's always amusing when the uninvolved ones describe each other. I like the way you wrote that kiss...what a pretty image that made, Ken all strong and a bit forceful, Daisuke freaked out but intrigued...
Hee. I can't wait to see what happens next! | Reviewed By: Neino On: September 11, 2003 02:02 CDT
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~hums a happy tune~
Yay! I love it, I love it. More! | Reviewed By: Konpeitou [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 21:35 CDT
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I didn't review this before? What was wrong with me?! As always, an excellent story. And the work of two wonderful authors is fantastic. I'm glad you updated. This is an interesting story and I look forward to more *hopes for more of the other stories too, though* Ganbatte! ^__^!! | Reviewed By: Ashna [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 21:30 CDT
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gyah! another story! *sob*
oh well I can't bitch you out for not updating your otherones... I havn't touched mine... since ff.net took away the nc-17ness.. >.>
anyhoo! I LIKE this one!
Uuuupdate!
Everything | Reviewed By: Ice-is Blue [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Aphrael and Sugah? *faints from pleasure overload*
More, more, more! *begs*
Hmmm.... I've an inkling that the message says something to the effect of 'Kill those that are delivered along with this letter'.... And I'm wondering if either Kou or Dai knows how to open it.... or maybe they already know what they're being sent to the Tower for. Also... It's not clear how much time has passed between the prologue and the first chapter. But that could just be me... Dai's age is told in comparison to Ken's, but I'm not sure how much older Kou is. *shrugs* Probably doesn't matter too much, ne?
Anywho, loved these first two chappies. Lots of excitement, action, and blushes... great characterization. I'm waiting eagerly for more!
*coughs and points upwards to niner's review* | Reviewed By: niner On: August 02, 2003 23:52 CDT
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Hey Sugah
You sure like to start new fics without finishing the old ones don't you? This story appears to be just as entertaining as the others but don't forget to update all your stories. I'm haning out for the next chapter of about three of your unfinished fics. Keep up all the good work | Reviewed By: Yami no Kaiba [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 03:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*wide eyes* Holy... The two of you? Working together on this? Now when I saw that, I knew it would be good, but dang! You two can bet that I'll be following this one to the end. Spelling and grammar's a bit off in some places, but don't worry, unless the reader's really stupid they'll figure out what you two wanted to say.
Now for my favorite part of reviewing... Asking questions that I have to wait for the answers to. ^_^
I'm getting the feeling that there's a bit more to why Kou-kun and Dai-kun don't want to go to this Tower. Is it because: a)the Tower's situated in the city they ran away from, b)once there they won't be able to escape becoming Sorcerrors and they don't want to be in that line of work, c)they just don't like this feudal system I'm sensing and want to rebel in any way possible from authority, d)there's bad word on the street's about this Tower, or e)Kou-kun just doesn't trust adults anymore.
*giggles* But really, you don't have to answer right away. Eventually will be nice, but I can wait for the story to reveal the info I want.
Oh, and the whole Ken staring and then showing off for Dai-kun? Loved it. Seem's to me this infatuation of Ken's is gonna get him in a lot of trouble...
--Emerald Star / YnK ^_^ | Reviewed By: SOTU On: August 01, 2003 22:47 CDT
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Steller;-) Love your work Sug... Keep it up! Please! Can't wait for more... | Reviewed By: bella On: August 03, 2003 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*insert lots of fangirly noises here*
Now thats over and done with.
I love it so far.
You guys should collab more often, because this is beautiful.
(eagerly awaiting more)
bella |
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