| "Second Chances" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Hmmm On: October 28, 2004 14:42 CDT
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I like the premise very much but please slow up on the whole japanese phrases. I'm not the type who likes to keep guessing what they just said. And well having to wait til the end of the chapter to find out ain't workign for me. But overall it is a interesting story.
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Reviewed By: Miyuki no Chi On: September 29, 2004 14:39 CDT
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Sugoi! I love it so far. Neeheehee! Little Yuki-kun is so adorable ne? Ano sa ano sa, Miss Raberba girl I don't think Miss Gial8 was trying to show off at all. I think she simply did it because she wanted to. Personally I think it's fun to try and guess the meaning of unfamiliar phrases. I like that kind of challenge. And she did put a mini glossary at the bottom of the chapter so it really shouldn't matter I would think.Thank you Miss Gial8 for writing such an enjoyable story. I look forward to future chapters. Laterdays! =^-^=
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Reviewed By: BrokenDreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree, its very good but the phrases confused me, although i love japanese i dont think u should mix long phrases in with english, it'll make the story more easier 2 understand if u just use basic japanese phrases but i did like ur story alot, please do update soon and please email me wen u do! thanks - brokenfaeriegirl@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Raberba girl On: August 19, 2004 19:02 CDT
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The premise was pretty good, but I was kind of annoyed by all the Japanese. A few commonplace words might be acceptable, like "nani" and "gomen," but it starts to get annoying when there are a lot of whole phrases in a different language. This story is written in English; you should use Japanese words here and there, if you choose to use them at all, to add a touch of authenticity to the story, not to show off that you know more Japanese than the reader. Sorry to be so harsh, but that's one of my pet peeves. Please e-mail me when you update (jemmie12@yahoo.com).
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