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"Red Lantern" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ]
 Title: happy cows
Reviewed By: HannaShields [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 16, 2004 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hiya i am working on a cyborg 009 fanfic about how three sailor scouts become cyborgs but i need ideas if ya have any contact me keep on writing and please update soon Luv your storys bye!!!!!
 Title: luv ya storys
Reviewed By: HannaShields [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 29, 2004 23:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
it is so cool i love this story and a bullet in the dark that is way tight poor inu *sniffsniff* oh and please update !!!
 Reviewed By: Silver Dimes  On: March 19, 2004 18:23 CST
Comment/Review:
this is really a great story. especially since most romance stories have boundless love (y'know, room for relationship), but when you stick two people in a caste (sp?) system, it changes entirely. very interesting- I applaud you! but seriously, four months is a veeerry long time to not update.. we're all dying for a new chapter! please update soon! ... happy cows :)
 Reviewed By: Julitica [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 10, 2004 20:08 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please continue
 Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko(sowwy im not signed in!)  On: November 02, 2003 14:47 CST
Comment/Review:
hehe... HAPPY COWS!!! ive always wanted to say that...>.> anyways, im glad u updated and next time can u say my name at the end of the chapter? nobody ever does that for me and it makes me feel unimportant... hey what's ur favorite little smily? myns these 2: ^_^ and 0-_-
 Reviewed By: residentevilgirl [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 31, 2003 21:54 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this fic! Please update soon.
 Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 19, 2003 18:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
HI! I like this story 2! Please make this a kag/inu fic!!! eewwww... she slept with naraku... >.
 Reviewed By: Silver Talons [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2003 21:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sayo I think is Rin and the Master is Naraku please update soon! I love it! get yasha and kag together! ja ne- silver talons
 Reviewed By: Aurora_thorn [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 14, 2003 18:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Errr... (looks at review below) I don't plan on killing you if you don't update soon, but I'll be extreemly po'ed if you don't. ^.^ Udate soon please.
 Reviewed By: Hell's lil Bitch  On: September 21, 2003 02:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
i gave u a 9 4 writing too slow. but other wise i would have given u 10. anywayz HURRY THE HELL UP BEFORE I JUMP UR ASS AND KILL IT!!!!>
 Reviewed By: update  On: September 20, 2003 11:50 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love your fict please continue.
 Reviewed By: Mai  On: August 03, 2003 13:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Nice idea. Please continue. :)
 Reviewed By: Kirisame [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 02, 2003 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh , I loved this movie !!
Raise the Red Lantern is Zhang Yimou 's masterpiece ! (I think...)
It's so beautiful it hurts ...And Gong Li is really great as Song Lian.
It's a wonderful adaptation of 'Wives and Concubines' by Su Tong.
Anyway , back to your fic :
Kikyo is perfect in Cao Cuifen !!
I loved your idea !!
Personally, I think that know you've settled things, you should let go of the movie plot, and let your own plot kick in ( 'coz like you said, the end is tooooo sad)... and start developing things (You know, like showing Kagome's feelings... well, you know, stuff... ^^)
Take your time !
'Coz you've got a very good idea, you should go further in the character psychology (I think ).

Make it good !

I believe in you !

*waiting for chapter 2 ^^*

Kirisame

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