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Reviewed By: cj flutterbye On: March 10, 2005 10:44 CST
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Oh my - you do have them in a 'place' don't you! Kagome better work on that damn picture before time runs out - I know it will be smashing because of all the emotions she's got swirling around her. Hope to see the new chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 01:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woohoo.i love this story so much. i can't wait to see what happens next! you keep me wanting more after every update. my toes curl when i read about kag and kouga. it's that good. the mixed emotions that kag has for inu have me wondering. you really know how to ping pong my brain around. I LOVE IT!
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Title: Excellent!
Reviewed By: Sintar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so glad you updated!! I really like the portrale of Sango, she seems fun and flirtacious, I love it! I am so confused as to who she should be with, if only there were two Kagomes! LOL
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Reviewed By: Chaos-and-Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 12:54 CST
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This story is so much fun to read! I love it! I am thoroughly enjoying how you have captured all of the characters' feelings so intensely. I am impatiently awaiting your next update, so please hurry!
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Reviewed By: Chaos-and-Serenity [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 12:52 CST
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This story is so much fun to read! I love it! I am thoroughly enjoying how you have captured all of the characters' feelings so intensely. I am impatiently awaiting your next update, so please hurry!
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Title: shivers!
Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think i'll have to agree there w/ fallenangel17583.also w/ Rogue-Xile. chap.18 is my favorite chap. so far. it is really the start of some serious soul searching and decision making. sooo, please update soon, and thanks for having more thanone little page for us when you do!! (alot of authors skimp out on the pages) btw, it is really hard to type when you have a band-aid on your middlefinger.(i have a boo boo):(
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: February 14, 2005 22:11 CST
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O_O woah. my, how this story tears at my heart chapter by chapter. i can completly see the two sides of your male characters and understand and feel bad for Kagome who is stuck in the middle. you managed to capture some real raw emotion between Kagome and Kouga in the end of this chapter! i'm beginning to realize that the only way Kagome is going to make a descision is when one of the boys make it for her. it is going to take one of them to walk away, which would only destroy her more...but sometimes...regardless of the tears, it is what is needed. but how do you chose between the love of your life and your long time bestfreind/love? wow...that's...just wow.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2005 11:52 CST
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One of those boys is going to end up broken-hearted - Kagome is going to twist with it too. Poor Kouga - hearing her shout/plead to Inu's name in her sleep - Wonderful stuff. Looking forward to more.
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Reviewed By: Miztikal_Dragon nsi On: February 14, 2005 02:21 CST
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OOOOO poor babies! *squeals* please keep up the good work and update asap. I can't wait to find out what happens next. POOR KOGA! He he he -krystal-
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Reviewed By: skeeb On: February 14, 2005 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! This story is amazing! I am loving the sexual tension between the characters---but I feel sorry for Kouga, poor guy, he always gets left out in fanfictions... but I love your story and can't wait until the next update! My name is actually heniya, but mm.org is not letting me leave a review w/ that name! grrr!
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Reviewed By: Aitu--not signed in On: February 13, 2005 22:05 CST
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Damn. I'm torn in two as well. I think my heart broke when Kouga and Kagome walked in to see Inuyasha in such a state with his "company". It's just heart breaking to see Kagome and Inuyasha like this. It's like you just want Kouga to disappear at times so there's no problems between the other two-- but at the same time I adore Kouga as well. I think that I've shared this argument before, lol. hmm. I guess from Kouga's point of view this all has to be kind of like warning signs? And Inuyasha's fiasco-- was that an act of desperation? Hmm. Maybe I'm wrong, maybe I'm right-- I don't know. But I bet you do! hahaha. So if you'd be so kind as to drop a few hints it would be greatly appreciated. te he he But yes, fabulous job! Your writing skills never cease to amaze me. I cannot wait to see what will happen next. Great job and keep up the amazing work!!! --aitu
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: February 13, 2005 21:43 CST
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omgosh who is Kagome gonna use?! i want her to end up with inuyasha but kouga is so sweet too. ahh the dilema. plz update soon!
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Reviewed By: Rogue-Xile [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 20:22 CST
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I have one word to say; finally. Finally Inuyasha stops looking like a sad puppy dog (no pun intended), and finally Kagome feels what Inuyasha feels when he sees her with Kouga. I fell bad for Kouga at the end of this chapter. I was wondering if maybe you'd put a little more of inuyasha's thoughts on whats going on so far and to explain his "actions". Nice chapter, maybe my most favorite out of all the chapters with angst.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2005 17:07 CST
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I'm enjoying this story very much. I have read a few of your stories now, and find that you have a very original style, wonderful emotional mix in your stories. I look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: inuyashasgirl987654321 On: February 12, 2005 02:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update! Update! This story is Colossal!!! Koga and Kagome make the best couple! Anyway, keep it up! And ALWAYS remember:FLUFFINESS ROXXX!!!!
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