| "Between The Lines" Reviews/Comments [ 132 ] |
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Reviewed By: ginuh On: June 11, 2008 01:28 CDT
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It had to be Kouga, the song at the end is Drowning by the Backstreet Boys!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 08:33 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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wonderful story... enjoyed reading it... would have wanted to know who you picked for kagome in the end... but i really like inuyasha/kagome pairing so i think it's inuyasha... great work...
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Reviewed By: swanda On: July 05, 2007 02:46 CDT
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OMGGG I really really really enjoyed your story. I love how in the end the reader ultimately decides who she goes with and though I love Inuyasha to death I can't help but feel like it was Kouga. Oh well,keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Laria On: February 15, 2007 02:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic, but the end is like WTF! It NEVER says the NAME of the guy she's with! I guess it was Inu but I really don't know... And what was with all the random ALL CAPS words? Those were totally unnecessary and made the conversations seem overly emotional, it almost seemed like they were all bipolar with the way they talked. Aside from that it was good.
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Reviewed By: VelvetNight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2006 18:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, wow, WOW!!! I've read a few love triangles involving Kagome, but never one like this. I've been a fan of your work for a really long time. The first thing I read was WHWM, then I went onto your collection of one-shots. You are an amazing romance writer. I especially loved the balance you achieved in BtL: just the right amount of drama, fluff, humor, and of course...CITRUS.... and what citrus it was!!! Whoo...maaaadd props to you, girl!! Keep up the awesome work!! ~VelvetNight
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_girl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2005 12:16 CST
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I read this story a while ago but it still is one of the best story I have read. I think Kagome should of been with Koga but I think Inuyasha is the one that came after her. I like Inuyasha better but she seemed to like Koga better.
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Reviewed By: Sanura [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2005 23:44 CDT
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Nice. I loved it. And I think I know why you never mentioned who it was Kagome ended up with. Everyone has their own opinion on the Inuyasha/Kagome/Kouga love triangle. So whether the person reading the fic prefers Inuyasha/Kagome over Kouga/Kagome (or vice versa), they'd be satisfied with it either way. They choose who Kagome ends up with. Personally, I thought it was Kouga. Dunno why, I've always liked Kagome/Kouga fics.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: kime On: August 12, 2005 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this story, as well as your others. the ending i liked too beacuse then you can place both of the guys in the picture! i loved it and i hope you continue writing!
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Title: 0.o
Reviewed By: srcyazngirl On: August 12, 2005 05:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LUVED DIZ STORY SOO MUCH!!!! BUT WAS READY TO KILL U WEN U DIDNT TELL ME WHO SHE ENDED UP WITH!!!!!! but den if u did it wouldnt hav much of an impacted as it did, tho i wis h u streched da story a bit more nd elaborated on der conversations in chap 25.... phhoooeeee, but its still rocks up der in one of da best fan fics i hav ever read
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Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 12, 2005 01:37 CDT
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cool ending, but who did she pick. I would like to think Inuyasha, but he called her baby, so maybe it was Kouga...hm. I aint sure, arg!
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Reviewed By: leialchan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think im hyperventilating over here. omg, i loved this fic sooo much. im sure that after chap. 25 it would have been really hard to write another chap. i mean, where could she possibly have gone from there. in real life, i believe that ones reactions would have been similar, if not exact to kags. how can someone handle all of that emotion!? i'm impressed that you could even write out a great ending/epilogue, cuz i was stumped as to what you could post next. having it end like that was pure talent i tell you, and i hope you are as happy with it as we are. you are definitely my fav. author here and i am thankful that you share your stories with us. please continue to write. i would be so sad :( if you didn't. im looking forward to new chapters for MP. that one is gonna kick @ss. i can tell!! ;) btw...who did she end up with. knowing you, you aren't gonna tell us, huh. please don't do that to me. or worse, tell us to decide for ourselves. i might actually succumb to the hyperventilation and pass out. no one is home and i might hit my head on something and die. it would be all your fault!! *curls into a ball 'till your promised a/n*
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Reviewed By: Laurell-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 14:59 CDT
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Hey! I've never reviewed you here and its about time I should! As always loved the ending hun, and the reactions you're getting hehe. You inspired me too :D hehehe. Talk to you later babe! Congrats on finishing it!!
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Title: o_O
Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 10:45 CDT
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Ok. I read it twice. It is beautiful, heartbreaking, but warm, and touching too. But I can't tell which man came to find her. Was that something you did by design? She never says his name, there is never a hair or eye color. I'd like to think it was Yasha, but there is nothing that is conclusive... I just can't tell. Beautiful none the less.
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Reviewed By: Tyred1234509 On: August 01, 2005 20:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!YOU LIKE TOTALLY RULE PLEASE END THE MISERY OF WAITING I'M DYING OVER HERE
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Reviewed By: SRP (not logged in) On: July 14, 2005 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! so much drama and emotional overload!!! sounds like my mother soap operas! LOL I thought Kagome anf Inu were never gonna get together!!! Whew! Glad that little tid bit is over!..hhhmmm...next chappie gonna be the last? or was that the end?...hhmm...WOW! SRP
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