| "Tribute" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: Hey...
Reviewed By: AnimeFanJ On: July 24, 2005 00:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude....I want the rest!!!!
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Title: 0_o
Reviewed By: Chaos Damn It (Not Logged) On: February 19, 2004 22:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm.... More PLZ. Its al'ight. (Colud use some work)
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Title: uh-oh, you found me!
Reviewed By: soul sword [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2003 05:09 CST
Comment/Review:
oh well. thanks for the review, anyway
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Title: *disbelieving cough
Reviewed By: soulsword [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 06:01 CST
Comment/Review:
where...are....metallica.....?
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Title: 3rd chap
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2003 09:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Intruiging and funny as hell
Loved the confrontation and the Rei sway Aye!
*Goes into a corus of Macalenia with Pen-Pen* |
Title: chap 1
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron (unregistered) On: August 31, 2003 05:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far ,
Interesting use of plot as well
I wait more and good luck |
Reviewed By: Kenshiro Mitsui [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2003 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will give credit where it is due... the plot is original. But for the most part, it just reads to me as being very fanboyish.
Your formatting of the story is bad, with the sentences spaced too far apart, and very little usage of actual paragraphs. Spelling and grammar are palatable, but your word usage and style are unimaginative and repetitive. The characters in this story are like cardboard cutouts of the real people/anime characters, and are abosolutely lifeless.
In short, this fic is boring, and stereotypically fanboyish. I suggest you rethink the characterization of the people in this story, especially the rock stars, since they seem to be the main focus of this story, instead of Evangelion. After watching The Osbournes and those VH1 shows about the past rockers, I doubt that Ozzy or Axl or anyone of them are so dull in real life. |
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
As i told you, I the mighty Megatron have reveiwed this
Points Blaster at Optimus's cranium* Continue fleshbag if you value your existance
Oh yes the fleshbag known as Brian says Hi! |
