Reviewed By: delaney On: August 23, 2003 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting tableau: starts with an impression and culminates into an understanding. you definitely grasp the need to move from event “a” to event “b,” and there’s your basic essence of plotting. having said that? great, because that’s a rarity (in fanfic i’ve seen) and also something to work from.
i don’t find dilandau’s crying out of character, per se, but in your foreword you sounded antsy about that. i’m not big on songfics, so take what follows how you will, but it seems to me more of a hindrance than a useful tool if you have to adjust character traits to suit your music selection.
and here’s one nitpick of a mistake i did notice: you confused “reside” with “recede.”
other than the little things, i think you’re off to a good start as a fanfic author. sorry if i come off all pedantic, but i’m trying to be a mindful reviewer, here! |
