|"Tsunami Angel" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]|
| Title: Sunshine and Puppies|
Reviewed By: Sunshine and Puppies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2006 01:45 CDT
What, may I ask, are you doing here? This isn't the place for you. There are good authors within fanfiction, not to insinuate that there are not. However, you should very strongly consider working on an original piece.
| Title: wtf?|
Reviewed By: brittna On: July 28, 2005 02:06 CDT
Style of Writing: 5 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10
I don't get it. What the eff was that?
| Title: Mary sue....|
Reviewed By: Kik On: January 19, 2005 12:42 CST
I seriously think you need to look over your character. She sounds like a Mary-sue. We need to know more about her, so SHOW her character, not just tell us what she's about.