| "Codename: HANYOU" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: super cool
Reviewed By: babydragon213 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2006 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
is ten the number one # cuz if it is i rated urs the super best i just need to know where the rest of it is im so sad i didnt read the rest of ur super kool fanfic. well lub ur work a ton p.s this is my first review so i didnt know whut to really right (gigles)!!! bye
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Reviewed By: Blue-eyed Floozy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 12:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
So good. I never noticed how many stories you actually had. But why did you never update this one? It's really good! And it could've been sooooo cool! Just like you're one with the desert and the slaves that I'm still waiting for you to update. Hint hint. Anyway, I know how it is with life getting in the way and I myself haven't updated in like almost a year on both of my stories so I don't really have room to talk. But I will be posting within the next month on both. Shhh. Don't tell. So I hope you pick this story back up. And if you don't, well, it would definately suck, but most fics go the way of the Dodo. Too many actually. Some really good ones to. Just like this one. You're an awesome writer with a big imagination and a firm grasp on your grammar. That, is a very, very good thing. So update soon please on this and the other one. Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease.....
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Title: Hurry!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Black Kitty [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I barely review stories anymore and I only review stories that are captivating and yours is one that really caught my eye. I love the way you described Inuyasha's hair. Hurry Please all the good stories I like barely get updated and I really wish you would break my unlucky streak by updating!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: wolfstar03 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2004 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Yuzuki On: December 24, 2003 19:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! Keep it up!!! ^^
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Title: hello!
Reviewed By: lindy*girl On: September 28, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
people would probably notice this if it had more chapters...oh well, I like it. This is a neat idea, can't wait to see how it turns out ^_^. =^.^=byebye!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2003 11:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
Though none of your other chapters will be this long, I have to say your story has definatly got my attention! I liked the plot and your stlye of writing. Like myself, you use different words to descibe things that you have already mentioned. Giving it a fresh and new feel. By the way loved the way you described InuYasha's hair! Platnium! No one has used that term to describe his hair yet. (for that you get extra props in my book for originality)
And I know this might be a little stressful on you but I have a request. If you have the time, could you make a couple more chapters this long? You don't have to though. I'm just being selfish really, when I read an update I like to have more than a few pages. (needless to say this chapter was right up my alley!) And I wouldn't have been able to see it if I didn't save it just before Media Miner shut down. Can't wait for your next chapter! Update, soon!
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