| "The Claim" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2003 17:12 CDT
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Awww... *sniff* so wonderful. Now, I am awaiting the next part, I cannot wait to see what else the two are going to do. Duo has a road of healing to walk up, and Heero now has to open up. And comfort each other. Please update soon!! *hugs*
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Reviewed By: Rurouni Lilouani On: September 25, 2003 21:04 CDT
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AHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! NO MORE ENDINGS LIKE THAT MISSING UNLESS U UPDATE, LIKE . . . THE NEXT DAY!!! LOL! Can this fic get any better? PPEEEEEEEEZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!! **cheers enthusiastically** KEEP WRITING!! KEEP WRITING!! KEEP WRITING!! KEEP WRITING!!. . .**CONTINUES FOR THE NEXT TWO HRS** (lmao!! ^_~)
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 23:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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How is Heero going to snap Duo out of it?
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Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 14:39 CDT
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OMG!! Poor Duo!! *cries for Duo* I hope he doesn't follow through with the suicide, and that Heero will save Duo from his hell. This story is so emotional, I can't wait to see more! Keep up the wonderful work! |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 21, 2003 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a sad chapter. I can't wait to read how the story progresses. Keep up the great job. |
Title: Part 4 and 5
Reviewed By: Enna Namo [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 07:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Too all those who voted for Duo's child to die:
ARE YOU HAPPY NOW? I'M NOT!!!!! |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: September 20, 2003 14:19 CDT
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that wads such a mean way to end this chapter - must have more |
Reviewed By: sapphire On: September 18, 2003 20:15 CDT
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that was so sad - more soon please |
Title: the claim
Reviewed By: staringshayne On: September 16, 2003 07:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man,you can't let Duo lose the baby.please say it will not happen! That would be to much heart break.Heero was right it would destroy Duo completey.The baby is loved and he has tried so hard to care for it,and it means so much to this story.you have me wanting more and hope things turn out okay.The feelings i have for this are a bit intense,you are a very good if not a great writer.Keep up the great work. |
Title: WOW
Reviewed By: Tpassinthrough On: September 15, 2003 12:07 CDT
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i just love this story please keep writing.the characters just come alive.i can hardly wiat to see whats going to happen next. |
Reviewed By: blakc beauty On: September 15, 2003 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic. Keep up the good job. |
Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 23:09 CDT
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I really cannot wait to see more. Duo's life is on the line, and he already lost his child. *cries* (This is my third time reading this, yes, this story is that good.) What's going to happen now?! I truly hope everything will be okay, and that Heero will help Duo out. Hai, this is very good!! |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 21:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Duo's going to be heartbroken at the loss of his child, but I think that the story will be a much more enjoyable read. |
Reviewed By: battousai [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Duo-chan!! this is the first time i've seen heero with an animal named shinigami ususally it's wing or zero (nice)
keep it up!!!! |
Reviewed By: Mashiro_Karasu [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2003 18:02 CDT
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great chapter! i really love shinigami...didnt think of Heero as the type to have a dog *grins*. so when can we expect another chapter? I gotta have more to read! |
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