| "The Claim" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: 102000 On: September 09, 2003 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like Mpregs very much, but I agree with others.The baby cannot be saved and Duo should have Heeros Baby. |
Reviewed By: hmm On: September 08, 2003 22:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Really good story so far. I cannot wait to find out what happenes. I think he should lose it and have Heero's baby a while later. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: DuosDemi On: September 08, 2003 21:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm very excited but how the plot is shaping. I know this might sound cruel and unjust but you should kill Duo's baby.Heero and Duo should get together of course, and have kiddies of their own! Some Trowa and Quatre coupling is never bad either. 1X2! 2x1! whatever it's all good! |
Reviewed By: black beauty On: September 08, 2003 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting fanfic. At the begining I wasn't sure what to make of MP but for some reason I kinda like this fic. Must be the pairings I guess. I think Dou should loose the baby. Keep up the great job. |
Reviewed By: black cloud On: September 08, 2003 19:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
If you're going for realistic, a pregnant person who is bleeding as badly as you described has already miscarried and their body just has to abort the fetus naturally. Especially in primative conditions such as Heero's hut, there's no way a baby could be saved. Guess that's my vote. |
Reviewed By: Lil-Cabbit On: September 08, 2003 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There's a ton of potential in this fic--please keep writing. As to the plot--Duo should lose the baby. I've enjoyed what you've written! |
Reviewed By: kiriko On: September 08, 2003 14:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Duo should lose the baby. Keep up the writings and pls update THE BOND!!!PLS!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Sarin On: September 08, 2003 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting I want to know more I am not sure on the baby thing however... so I won't vote. I just wanted to tell you to keep going and I cannot wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 12:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I think Duo should lose the baby.
So that's how Heero became Enforcer. |
Reviewed By: Mary On: August 22, 2003 16:36 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very Good story. I dont normally like male pregnancy stories, but this one looks really good! Please keep writting it. I read a comment (a good one) of your fic in the 1x2ml, thatīs why i look for it. Please update soon |
Reviewed By: Airen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 01:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't think I would like this, but I did! Very well-written and fairy tale-esque...I hope you continue! ^^; |
Reviewed By: Oni On: August 20, 2003 23:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't normally review but I want to read more of this story. I think it was great different from the others I am reading. Keep on writing it please. |
Reviewed By: PATTY 40 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 22:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I want to read more, Please ...I know this is the 1st chapter but it looks or sounds good and I want more so please update soon thanks |
Reviewed By: hmmmm.... On: August 20, 2003 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i like this fic alot. that's unusual because i normally can't stand mpreg stories, but the way you wove it in to the au setting and explained it was interesting. i hope to see more of this in the future. |
Reviewed By: Danes With Fyre [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2003 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow. Definetly a intresting story so far. And sadly, I pictured poor Duo, my tortured beakon, being like that so muchly is scared me. That's powerful stuff! I truly can't wait to see more! |
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