| "Buried Secrets: The Memoirs of a Sohma" Reviews/Comments [ 47 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jadedragon24 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 20:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I started reading it on your website and was disapointed that the last year wasn't up yet. I was so glad when I saw it here.
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Reviewed By: seachicken On: May 02, 2007 23:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was like reading a real book, it's great. i spent like an hour reading, and i couldn't stop. i think it needs a sequel.
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Title: WAHHHHHHHHHHH
Reviewed By: Fira [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2005 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wahh!! Yuki-sans dead!! but otherwise i luv the storykeep it up!!
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Reviewed By: Celie_Clery On: March 30, 2005 17:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an amazing fanfiction. A few misspellings here or there but otherwise it's amazing.
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Reviewed By: Yukisuke-ta [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 02:32 CST
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You know that medium length review I posted, well my friends have read up to chapter 8 and my printer broke and they are all 'creatures of light' on me and it was scary, so my friends would probably do anything to read the rest *winks* ~Yukisuke-ta
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Reviewed By: Kudari On: February 24, 2005 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked your story, plus you used my name as your character's. It was interesting.
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Reviewed By: Yukisuke-ta [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2005 22:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha once I got to the review page it said I wasn't logged in ^_^''' I LOVED this story its so detailed and I was explaining to to my friend, like a summary, and she was like "I WANNA READ IT!" cause for some reason I got all my friends onto anime and manga, the addictics we are, so I started printing it off and I was like whoa thats a long story, I hope she loves it as much as I did, you are good at writing you have so much creativity and its like you are Sierra Sohoma explaining the story to us and basically if that was real like (dispite the zodiac), the plot is realistic and the characters would really probably do that, and I couldn't really tell hey this is gunna happen next and be right, lol, well anyways, I loved your story and all that, and BTW my sister loves your style of writing *winks* Byes ~Yukisuke-ta
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Reviewed By: sieg_fan_yuki On: October 16, 2004 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there! your story is really good and i mean excellent!!!! the plot type is interesting esp at the end!! it felt as if i were reading the actual book itself rather than a fan-fic! seriouly, you have the talent, mayb you could even publish a book ^.^, like Shigure :) keep it up and i hope to see more stories. this one has left a (deep) and good impression on me and it has officialy been voted as one of my favourites!!! you must have spent a lot of time writing this and i appauld you for your creativity. thanks for the great story, i needed it to de-stress!! Ganbatte ne!!
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Reviewed By: sieg_fan_yuki On: October 16, 2004 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey there! your story is really good and i mean excellent!!!! the plot type is interesting esp at the end!! it felt as if i were reading the actual book itself rather than a fan-fic! seriouly, you have the talent, mayb you could even publish a book ^.^, like Shigure :) keep it up and i hope to see more stories. this one has left a (deep) and good impression on me and it has officialy been voted as one of my favourites!!! you must have spent a lot of time writing this and i appauld you for your creativity. thanks for the great story, i needed it to de-stress!! Ganbatte ne!!
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Reviewed By: Bronze Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2004 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hay! (waves) me again (aka bronze dagger) just wanna write this review and add this story and you to my favourate story/autor list thingy ^_^ well as i said this is an excellent story! i'm inspired! i've never writen a fb story!!! well am looking forward to reading more of your work
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Title: great story!
Reviewed By: bronze dagger (i haven't logged in yet^-^;;) On: October 14, 2004 07:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hay! just wanna say that this is a truely fantastic story, i started reading it on sunday and just finished it last night, i just couldn't stop reading it! (although i had to stop at certain points... i'm a big coward... but after an hours pause i'd always go back to reading it) it was so believable! the caractors stayed in caractor (which is a nice change) your oc was very good. i cried when yuki died and when thoru went to visit his grave, loved the happy (ish) ending... i would love to read a continuance to this story! i would read it! i would! well anyway! most go! will most definately cheack out more of your work! bye!
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Title: OMG!!! Pleeaasee write a sequel! Please!!!
Reviewed By: Spellcasterz On: September 29, 2004 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story, it was magnificent, though it had so much angst that I almost stopped reading a few times. It felt so real that I would have thought that it was a countinueation of Fruits Basket. I liked the second epilogue, it was the best since sierra met haru again. I really hope that you will write a sequel because I would go crazy not knowing if sierra ever remembered haru,tohru,kyo and the rest of the jyuunishi. I have an idea for the sequel! What if sierra gets her memmory back and everyone missed her and updated her on everything that happened after she went back to america! I really hope you write a sequel really really badly! If you decide to do a sequel then could you please email me at Spellcasterz4eva@yahoo.com?! Cuz with all my HW this year I might forget about checking. You could visit my profile at Fanfiction.Net, under spellcasterz, but it's going to be hard to find since I don't have any fics up yet. oh well! Ja ne! Spellcasterz
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Reviewed By: Aiko Kira On: September 11, 2004 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!! its finally ended >.< i really enjoyed reading it!! i hope u write another fanfic soon!! =D keep up the fantastic job!!
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Reviewed By: SecretFlame [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, the story's over. That was so sad! But it was good. I almost cried at the ending(both of them). It made me sad when Sierra's memories were erased and all, but otherwise, this story has been really good! Now it's time to check out some of your other work. By the way, great ending!
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Reviewed By: enchanted_blood [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 02:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You CRUEL SICK AND TWISTED TORTURE! HOW CAN YOU END IT THAT WAY?!...i must give you your props...Awesome fanfic! ^_^ You've really done a magnificent job. It almost seems as if this is an extension of the real Fruits Basket! Way to go! And keep up the enchanting work!
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Reviewed By: witchhuterR On: September 03, 2004 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon i love this story! it's awesome! ~ari~
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2004 20:47 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: lil cherry girl On: August 18, 2004 10:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! im absoloutly speachless!! this fanfic is the best fanfic ever!! althought it has only two more chapters left (update soon please!) plz start writing another fanfic wen this one is finished!! i think ur fanfics r amazing!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: Reimiko On: August 10, 2004 16:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, i can't believe YUKI DIED...so sad.... but over all, I just LOVE this fic... It's VERY good! You're such a great writer! Keep up the awesome work, and I'll be waiting for the next chapter!!!!! JA! Rei
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Reviewed By: Aiko Kira On: August 08, 2004 18:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konbanwa! this fanfic really is amazing, up date soon!! onegai!! hehehe... arigatou!!! =D
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Reviewed By: AMK [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 09:49 CDT
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Good gosh, it is taking me FOREVER to read this. I'm only just finished with chapter 5... *sweatdrop* I really love it so far, though. Sierra is a believable character (bonus points for that) and you've kept all the personalities accurate. This is one of the first Fruits Basket fanfictions I've ever read, and I just want to tell you that you're doing a wonderful job so far. ^^ Sorry that I've only read a little bit, though... I'll read more as soon as I have time!
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Reviewed By: Kyo_kitty On: August 02, 2004 13:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story, each chapter is better and you get more organized with your ideas. Moreover, except for a few grammar mistakes that I can't even remember of, the readablity is excellent. I really enjoy reading this story, even though it creeps me out (damn Akito!). However, I thought Kyo's intervention in this chapter is not really necessary, and I am sure you could use someone else -or even let her think of it herself- rather than Kyo, who, let's face it, really does not seem to play a big play a role in this story. I think I understand that you wanted to use his frank and sometime big-mouthed personnality to show that he was the one who made her think of it, but maybe someone else could have been better at that. Your fanfiction is one of the few i have ever read (eh...I just discovered the beautiful world of anime fandom ^^) and this is really the second time that I dare to write a review. I am not a writer myself, so I just speak as a fan. Sorry if my phrasing was inapropriate, english is not my mother tongue and some expressions and the formaliy used are directly taken from my native culture. Sorry if I sounded brash, but all in all, your story is reaally good, and I hope you'll keep on going. Thank you for reading my review.
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Reviewed By: Adria On: July 30, 2004 03:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now I really do hate Akito, lol! Miyu-chan! This is fabulous. I can't wait to see what Sierra's got up her sleeve! ^__^ More more more, onegai! :) Adria
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 14:39 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: sweet little cherry girl On: July 23, 2004 09:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!! i luv this fanfic!! its amazing!!!! =D update more and more!! onegai!!!! this story line is sooooo original and kool!! please update as soon as possible!! Arigatou!!!
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2004 12:23 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Akito Lover On: July 16, 2004 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i cant believe yuki died!! this is an amazing fanfic, plz update as soon as possible!!! ill be checking everyday!!!
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Reviewed By: animegirl411 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Reviewed By: Lover_girl15-20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2004 15:16 CDT
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Oh NOOO!!!!! YUKI DIED!!!!!!!!*cries* this*xob* cant*sob* be happening!!!*sob* well this fic is AWESOME!!! so update ok? i'm starting to relate to this fic!! and....NIOOOOO YUKI!!!!
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Reviewed By: little cherry girl On: May 21, 2004 16:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE write more!!! i wanna noe wats up with akito and that necklace!!!THIS IS THE BEST FANFIC EVER!!!! XD please update ASAP!!!! THX!!!
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