Reviewed By: Chi Vanye On: August 23, 2003 16:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice start. I hope that you don't plan to lock Ranma in his female form, but it's your story. It seems there would be a lot of options open with him as a single father. |
