| "Domestic" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: This was the best
Reviewed By: xandra vega On: April 03, 2004 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
.... This was the best thing I have ever read. I once called myself your loyal fan and now you cemented that. I know I said I was going to beta your story and I didn't, it was because the computer broke and I just now got it fixed. Thank you for writing such great stories that tear me to pieces. You are a aweome writer that has no compare. When you write a new story, I know I will love reading it as well.
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Title: It's great!!
Reviewed By: Cosette On: January 18, 2004 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic's great!! I'm really impressed. I'm not a great fan of fanfiction--namely, Final Fantasy fanfiction, but this one just hooked me, and I can't wait for the next chapter! I just want to let you know that you should mind your then/thans. Remember: then is used in the chronological sense, eg., i ate, then brushed my teeth. Than is used in the comparative sense, Eg., I'm better than you ever were at cooking. But other than that, I am impressed! :) Again, great writing.
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Reviewed By: crimson_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2004 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great fic you've got here. I just found it today because I haven't been to mediaminer in a while. Anyway the plot is well developed, and I absolutely love the way you portray the characters. I'm addicted! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: DL (fucking thing won't let me put Derek as a name) On: November 22, 2003 17:07 CST
Comment/Review:
So is beta reader taken, or what?
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Reviewed By: Sharem [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2003 16:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story with an engaging plotline. The fact that Zell is one of my favorite FF8 characters actually does not count in this review. I do like the character development with Travis and Wix does seem to be someone that one should not turn their back upon. However, I'm not entirely certain that Cid was in character in Chapter 10. Anyway, that part is only my opinion. Squall also seems to be OOC in parts, but he was mainly right on from what I remember from the game. I would like to see more involvment between Zell and TRavis as they become friends, I hope. And Travis' roommate is a character I'd like to see more of as well. I am curious as to what weapon she prefers to use.
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Title: Please don't let Wix come back
Reviewed By: xandra_vega@yahoo.com On: September 12, 2003 11:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
About assassinate Squall... I take that back. WIx is a menace, if Cid Edea get back in control, it will be hellish with their incompatant bully of a son there. Our SeeDs and students need to show who is boss when it comes to Garden. Garden was established for the preservation of peace and guarding civilians from militia. With Wix in it, all the guidelines and mantra behind the creation will be thrown out the door. Seifer had every right to bash the son of the bitch in the nose.
For an idea on the story
You can make it where Cid and Edea have some followers and our little group gets kicked out then the process of us getting the garden back.
I wouldn't mind being a beta reader if you don't have anyone else for the job. I am a loyal fan of of your works. I read ZDC as often as I turned on the computer and was one of those that most wanted ZDC2 before you lost inspiration. Enough of my ranting, I hope others come up with some great ideas and I get the chance to enjoy your writing again soon. |
Title: I fucking hate squall
Reviewed By: Zell's no.1 girl, Xan On: September 07, 2003 14:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Squall is a fucking spineless son of a bitch, he is lucky his mother died giving birth to him. If she was still alive, she would have wished she had drowned him at birth. Travis was standing up for his roommate and the sons of bitches get off attacking them? Grr... Keep writing, I know you have something major coming up now that you took Seifer out of prison. **smiles evily** I hope Seifer assasinates Squall. |
Reviewed By: Kie, again On: September 04, 2003 15:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just read the latest 2 chapters, and the story is progressing nicely! i think you've really captured the way Zell acts, talks and thinks!
More of the same, more of the same!
~~kie xxx |
Title: HEheh wet bed
Reviewed By: Xan_Nova ((Lost password AGAIN)) On: September 03, 2003 16:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Zell overpowered him and taught him a lesson. Am I detecting a friendship? Or is it.... a.... nah... I doubt you would do that. Again, I love this story. It is great.
Your most loyal reader, Xan |
Title: Great Stuff (( I just remember my password))
Reviewed By: xan_nova [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 15:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Zell rocks! He was so cool to make sure Travis got it, please don't stop this the way you stopped ZD2.... suddenly. I love Zell stories so please don't stop. |
Title: Duddeeee!!!
Reviewed By: Kie On: September 02, 2003 03:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I thought you captured the characters rather well, although, i always imagined squall's voice would be a bit lame, haha! Love the hot-dogs too :p
Love to read more, good stuff!
~~kie xxx |
Title: It keeps getting better
Reviewed By: Xan Vega ((I forgot my password to sign in with)) On: August 31, 2003 12:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... ant to think I was worried if you were going to write... you are blowing my socks off, never give up. I already hate Wix... I hope he gets killed. **Smiles evilly** Well in my story I would kill him off but in mine, Cid and Edea Kramer's child is female but was raised by Kiros Seagull. KEEP WRITING!!!! KEEP WRITING OR I WILL SCREAM!!!!! |
Title: I still miss ZDC
Reviewed By: Xan vega ((too lazy to sign in)) On: August 30, 2003 17:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this... it was so good to read another Zell story, he is my ultimate hotty other than my boyfriend. |
