| "Angel's Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: sele On: August 29, 2005 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you got the wrong chapter 4 for Angel's Gift, its a completely different one!! can you put up the right chapter 4.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lovers [MediaMiner Member] On: August 04, 2005 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the second original story i have read and i can say happily that i like it. please continue it soon
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Title: angel's gift
Reviewed By: newkid [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2005 17:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
awesome as always... keep up the great work.. question on chapt 3 or 4... forgot which one... but the sex,blood, and megik... was it part of the story line too? cuz after that is angel's gift part 5 so got a bit confused... on that... love it as always... still i do complain on the hared/hair typo... but i love it nontheless...
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Reviewed By: Miko454564564 On: April 24, 2005 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SO COOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish this was real anime. You should pitch the idea to some people. This is great, don't ever stop updating! ^_^
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Reviewed By: mouserr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 05:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
enjoyable lil romp you got going on here. the first few chapters had a bit of a rushed feel but were enjoyable enough to make you want to see hwat happens next. on the technical side youv got a nice bit of scifi science laid out and do well at describing the advanced engineering behind the more fantastical elements. the inclusion of male elements to the story is a nice touch and for diversity;s sake should be considered as additional material for the character development in the story. the story on whole has a good base for an epic adventure i look forward to the next instalment. >^-^< .
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Reviewed By: dessesbosram [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 20:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
uh...so is everybody gonna be a lesbo or something because one or two couples is okay, but SERIOUSLY, not everybody is gay. make it more real. SHEESH!!! oh...and i like it...
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Reviewed By: Adyen (Not Logged In) On: March 15, 2004 10:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this for a while, and I'm still amused by it. Btw, you changed tense in the last sentences. From 'man' to she/her... Is that a typo, or intentional?
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Reviewed By: Last Knight Thomas On: January 16, 2004 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
Just read the newest chapter. This is getting confusing!
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Reviewed By: Last Knight On: December 23, 2003 17:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story! I'm a guy, so i don't really know about the kind of romance you have in the story, but i liked it. write more!
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