| "Lies our parents told us" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Title: I NEVA THOUGHT I WUDD SAY THIS...0_0
Reviewed By: ReDiCuLoULy_gOoDlOoKiNg On: December 24, 2003 01:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u KNOW I NEVER THOUGH ID NEVA SAY THIS BUT...KILL VEGETA KILL VEGETA KILL VEGATA HAHA LOL YEAH...IT FEELS ALMOST GOOD AND BAD SAYING THAT AND ALL THESE MIXED FEELINGS CAME FRM THIS FANFIC DUDE YOU MUST be a talented writer KEEP IT UP,,,^-^
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Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 13:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep going on this fic! Its very original and I really want to find out what happens when Trunks and Goten sneak into the palace! It would be awesome if they got caught...*realizes she's being sadistic* Well, it would be interesting anyway. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: PeuTiFuL JaNe On: November 22, 2003 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woziz thats so sad the way fings wud have turned out huh!! keep up the kewl work and definitely keep updating!! :) the man!!
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Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! You finally updated! Does Trunks know about who his father is, or is he so cold because he doesn't? Looking forward to the next chapter ^-^
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Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2003 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic just keeps getting better. It makes things interesting to have Saiyan slaves as well as other races on Vegetasei. I'm glad Goten and Goku went to good homes, but what about Gohan? Will life be good at the palace? I love Gohan torture *laughs maliciously* Please, please, please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: Mely On: September 29, 2003 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good story. It's very different. Please continue!
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Reviewed By: SINUYASHA On: September 28, 2003 21:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
My bad i didn't read the third story. I feel real stupid now. Hehe........
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Reviewed By: SINUYASHA On: September 28, 2003 21:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story but what happened to the rest of the Z warriors i thought they were captive.
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Title: COo!
Reviewed By: AirForceArmygurl On: September 05, 2003 15:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is great!!! The spelling was a little off at times, but you could understand what you meant! Probably typos! I have never read a story like this before! I would love to see where this is going and if Trunks will ever know of his mother! |
Reviewed By: Night Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good! Very nice plot! I want to see more of this soon! |
