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Reviewed By: Narca [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2007 00:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Those doctors sure cracked me up in the end.... hehe... "so good I can't help myself." What a wonderful ending.
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Reviewed By: raynee On: December 12, 2005 20:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
weeeeee!!! it has a real nice endig. i like nice endings:)
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Title: bunny fufu
Reviewed By: Indi Doran On: June 09, 2004 18:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank the gods for people like you, i haven't read a good story in a while and here i am presented with a whole slew of them. I am steadily working my way through your works and have so far loved every one. Keep writing you are a godsend to the fandom. ~Kisses India Doran
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Title: i prefer web-goddess
Reviewed By: imbri On: December 17, 2003 09:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i enjoyed this fic a lot. it was fun to read and i really liked a lot of the ideas incorporated into it. demons from hell, a nice wu fei, real human problems, and you even got the maguanacs in there (if im not mistaken, those fifty odd guys that accompanied q when he pulled out his toys. jay was hilarious compared to many fics i read and seemed more in-character than others portray him. i only have one problem. i noticed the word chocked being used for the word choked, choke as in to strangle someone...i dont think chocked is what you meant. that would mean chock in the past tense or in the process of chocking...and im just ranting here cause that was the only mistake i could find...but really... i loved the story. now im off to the sequel.
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Reviewed By: Tsuki Doriimaa On: November 22, 2003 03:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHA! That was excellent!! Dude kick ass! lol I would SO love to se a sequel to this one!! Love how you wrote Jay in it.. know he's not in there so much, but the ending with him was funny as hell. ::sniggers grinning:: And that was your first fic? Damn, that was an excellent one! ^_~ Your writing, discription and details on it are great. Totally able to keep the readers attention. I certinally hope you've got a sequel to this one. ::chuckles:: heh Much luck in your other writings hun!! JA!
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Reviewed By: j On: October 30, 2003 18:17 CST
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cool!! gotta read this!
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Reviewed By: juliansfledging [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 14:08 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Please do the honeymoon sequel! Dawn
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 11, 2003 20:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The honeymoon would be great. This fic was wonderful. Keep up the excellent job.
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Title: Sequel!!!
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 20:52 CDT
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This little fic really needs a sequel...it would be cruel and unusual punishment if you did not continue. I really enjoyed it, it flowed very well and had a very interesting plot. It did not put either pilot in a position of weakness and that is fairly had to come by. I look forward to reading your next endevor.
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Reviewed By: Mora On: October 09, 2003 15:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was just the perfect ending! I would love to see a sequel, so my vote goes towards that!
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Reviewed By: The Firefaery [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 15:03 CDT
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Geez, babe...that little argument sort of thing going on at the end was hilarious! And then when Jay is like, damn I'm good! I was trying really, really hard not to crack up! I'm in a library, ya see. Anyways, pretty fabulous ending. I started suspecting Duo wasn't Treize's son, oh, I don't know when, back at like 22 or something. It's so good to be right! he hee ^_~ ^The Firefaery^
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Title: Turtle_Fire
Reviewed By: TurtleFire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 14:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A giant THANKS to you! The story is so delightful and sweet! A honeymoon to follow will definitely make it even better! A sequel pleaseeeee!!!
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 08, 2003 16:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool Twist. Nope I don't think I paid enough attention to those chapters. Maybe I should go back and read them. But I do remember Dou being the only one capable of using white magic. Mind you I didn't saw this coming and that is why I think this fanfic is cool. Yep, I love surprises! I can't wait to read the epilogue... I wonder will they end up together? Anywyas, keep up the good job.
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Reviewed By: GoldenRat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 11:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I wonder if Heero & Duo will marry? For state reasons, of course, NOT!
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Title: Zefyr
Reviewed By: Zefyr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2003 10:15 CDT
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Ah, GoldenRat is sharp like that. Keeps me on my toes with Drums, I'll tell you! ---- I caught Heero's reluctance to use magic, or the way he shied from it, in previous chapters, but filed it under "think about that when I don't have a head full of plotlines"... I've been reading avidly and you've done very well with the plot twist. Often a plot twist is unsupported, and Heero's post-catastrophe confession could've been a deus ex machina except that you did support it with foreshadowing details very nicely. It makes sense, in the story, and explains a great deal. Oh, that and I absolutely adored the repartee between J and G in the last chapter. That was hysterical!
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