| "Bound By Our Simple Mistakes" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: kokosada [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 09:04 CDT
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>.< Update goddamnit!
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Title: OMFG! You have'ta write more!!
Reviewed By: kokosada [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 13:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
You have to write more!! Ryou is awsome as an angel! *squeel!* ^^ If you don't write more, I'll have to force people to write more reviews! *plays with daggers*
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Reviewed By: koumori wolf On: February 26, 2004 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! please please please PLEASE continue it A.S.A.P. ^-^
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Reviewed By: koumori wolf On: February 26, 2004 20:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS STOREY!!!!!!! please please please PLEASE continue it A.S.A.P. ^-^
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Reviewed By: DA 101 On: October 07, 2003 20:23 CDT
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PLEASE write moe ASAP!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Rhap-chan On: September 30, 2003 18:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the better fanfics I've discovered lately. Fleeing ff.net in disgust, I've found this place and this fic... And I like! The concept is original (I think, anyway), the story moves along at a pleasant pace, and your characterization is quite good. Your only problem would be your grammar/spelling... You mix up synonyms and don't always use the correct grammar. But it's not very noticable, and if you need a beta mention it next chapter (I'd be happy to). Anyway, good fanfic, please continue! Rhapsody*~
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Reviewed By: Yasha (again......) On: September 28, 2003 18:37 CDT
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i almost forgot that i reviewed your other story silly me! i hope u like my review on that story :)
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Reviewed By: Yasha On: September 28, 2003 18:36 CDT
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great story i think you should add malik and marik to the story marik could be an angel and asigned to malik that would be cool is yami grandpa gonna find his life essance? hmm plz continue soon i cant wit to see how it turns out u sure are one of the best writters out there!
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Reviewed By: Dragans Lair On: September 27, 2003 22:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woow!cool!i love it!
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Reviewed By: Naru-chan On: September 27, 2003 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, keep it up i really want to know what happen to Bakura..
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Reviewed By: Ice Angel2 On: September 26, 2003 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
When I heared of this story I just had to see it!Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Dragon's Lair On: September 26, 2003 21:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I looove this!pleez hurry.what happens when the 3 angels reach the earth?
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