| "Final Fantasy VIII - 2" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: A little fast-paced but a really nice fic.
Reviewed By: Tom RO 91 (Grrrrr....they said I`m not signed in) On: January 09, 2005 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh,nice.It`s pretty good except the whole wedding thing happenned a little fast.Dont worry,my fics on this website arent that good besides my newest one Final Fantasy:The Ultimate Quest which is worse than yours anyways probably (Please read and review it because I havent gotten any reviews for it on this website,but Ive gotten 5 so far on a different website meaning Fanfiction.Net,sorry off topic)We need more battles though.MUCH MORE!
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Reviewed By: Timbo On: September 12, 2003 18:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am a big fan of final fantasy 8! I love it so far, but (not to be nit picking or anything) you should have more storytelling along with the conversations! |
Reviewed By: J-Mill [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2003 06:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not a bad premise. My only suggestion would be that you limit the conversations between 2-3 characters. When you get seven of them together it gets confusing. Otherwise you were good. Your spelling and grammar were good, so it ran smoothly. This is one of the better ones I've ran across today. |
