| "Book 3: A lack of faith brings insecurities..." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: jILL-CHAN On: April 26, 2004 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE CONTIRNUES THIS IS IS ONE OF THE BEST lh STORIES I'VE READ
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Reviewed By: shinseieikyu On: March 03, 2004 06:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the second chapter is nicely done, great use of new chalenges to bring the story to another climax, hope to read more from u soon!!
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Reviewed By: tambourine On: February 04, 2004 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please, please, please continue.
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Reviewed By: shinseieikyu On: October 06, 2003 08:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved your first 2 books but the 3rd seems a bit off standard. Interesting story development however and a very nice twist to it. I hope you'll write better the next time round and i look forward to reading it. PS: I hope you'll develope more of motoko's role in the story. You did a great job on her so far!
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Title: Fan Fic
Reviewed By: Ugleboi On: September 30, 2003 01:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The biggest problem with this book was it was a hell of a lot shorter than the first two. Kind of disappointing. But the suspense is good so i'll stay tuned to see what other works you put out.
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Title: SDF-1 CO
Reviewed By: Captain Gloval On: September 21, 2003 08:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the first 2 books. Very well written and good story progression. This newest installment doesn;t sit quite as well. Hopefully there will be more and things will pick back up. There was a little too much plot addidtion and not enough development. This chapter left me completly in the dark as to what is going on in the back ground.
Keep up the good work. I hope to see more on this story in the near future. |
