Title: How come?
Reviewed By: AmyAnderson45 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2003 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
How come no one reviewed your fanfiction? That's strange... I sometimes feel that I am the only one in this place that actually reads and reviews. I can probably guess why a majority of readers did not review your fanfiction. All you really have is dialogue. You need to add more to the characters then just there initials and some phrases. You do like to write a lot, which is good because you really like your characters. However, repeating dialogue sooner or later it gets kind of frustrating for the reader. This is not an insult and I am not trying to discourage you from writing because you have so much potential. You need to add descriptions of where these characters are and more about the characters personalities. Dialogue is not everything. Use it to make your story flow. Mix up emotions of what the characters are feeling at the time and some history (even if it's all fake.) Make it realistic than just slap stick comedy or whatever your trying to accomplish. Good luck to you and I hope you continue writing:-) |
