Reviewed By: Fei Rel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 18:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Y'know what? The people sound like Mary Sue types. Ok, look. When you make them all perfect-like (and in this case they're really creepy in my opinion) then it's not interesting. Honestly. I mean, people are interesting because of their faults and their good points. Too much of either is bad, and all but. Hey. That's just creepy. Mary Sue characters are creepy. Cut it out. So if you want an honest review that also has some good words in it for you, like compliments and such, then actually come up with something that's good and all. Give the characters real life instead of making them into falsified barbie dolls of online stories. It's just creepy. Ok, try again and see if you can do better than this.
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