| "Black Blood" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Katdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2004 16:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just by reading the summary I got a really cool mental picture. The idea for this is really interesting and I think it could go far if you really wanted to expand on the idea. You know, turn it into a whole story. As it is now, I'm not sure where he's at, or how he got there. The past has been explained, but I'm not so sure about the present. I really do think turning this into a several chapter story could work out really well. Would you consider it? ~~Kat
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Reviewed By: kristen89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2004 20:09 CST
Comment/Review:
I liked the begginging! will he ever find love?
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Reviewed By: yugiohgirl03 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 04:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok this is different...but good want to know more any chance of yami or tea or...shudder...seto???
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Reviewed By: JoeysGal [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2003 02:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is quite good, you should make Yugi find love with someone *coughYami/Anzucough* anyway, make sure you don't miss out on MY latest fic... "Of Fire and Of Ice" Please review it! I took the time to review yours!! |
