| "Introspection" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] |
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Title: FINISH AWAY
Reviewed By: ShadowedDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 14:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I also expected it to get into lemon. I mean seriously, you left a looooooot of room for it to happen. That would be soo cool if you did, but if you don't I can see it stopping there too.
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Reviewed By: Dragon's Lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 04:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lemonize all you wish; I was kind of expecting it. . . This must be finished with smut! :P Seriously though, don't make it JUST smut. . . keep up with the feelings and thoughts and such. ^^
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Title: Introspection
Reviewed By: Janie50989 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job,but is it finished?If it is please e-mail me,Janie50989@sbcglobal.net.Keep up the great work & catch ya later.
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Title: Yes.
Reviewed By: Harkkonen On: August 27, 2005 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*commands the lemonization* Fill it with some citris acid, baby! XD
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Title: Hi
Reviewed By: Slayer 666 On: August 24, 2005 20:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Think that you story is so cool i love guns n roses well i manly love all of the 80's. PUT AlUCARD and SERES together!!!! They should share emotion right there and then see how Integra takes it i really do hate her shes a total Wo-Man always so serious[Sigh]just thinking about her is giving me a headache anyway please update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Artemis_Vampiress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 17:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lemon? Lemon?! Where? I think you should go for lemon in the next chapter, but not wild and creepy. More...I dunno...passive, I guess. This is such a good fanfic so far, I'm gonna do something really ooc for me and beg you to update soon. Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease?!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Heart of Warrior [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 17:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Do add a lemon, but make it real pretty and loving. Make it gentle, not just moaning and groaning and hot sex.
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Reviewed By: Chess On: October 29, 2004 18:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. go ahead and lemonize it.
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Reviewed By: LC17 On: September 24, 2004 08:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
agreeing with MidNIght Kitsune I would have picked 'Sweet Child of Mine'instead of 'Cold November Rain' but whatever... and to answer you're question, do a lemon. Please? Let their firey passion consume them. Love, LC17
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Reviewed By: Youko's Befuddled Litttle Kitsune On: August 15, 2004 01:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think no matter what I say it is still up to you and what you feel confortable writing so do what you feel like putting in your story and I will like it either way because in my mind it will still be a great story ^__^
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Reviewed By: Thalia Branwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2004 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I care! I love your writing style and honestly, yes I want a lemon. There are so few good alucard and seras fics and damnit there should be more of them. And as for a lemon your writing style and this fic would lend themselves easily to one. So please please please please please! update soon, cus i really really really want to see what's going to happen here please HURRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But newaz i absolutely LOVE your fic and even if u don't lemonize it (although i am hopeing you do) i will still read it, but u have to update first!
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Reviewed By: Shiro Ryu On: June 26, 2004 02:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is so nice to find someone who writes well, and, is writing about Alucard and Seras as a couple. I have to admit, although I have not read or seen all the Hellsing episodes, I cannot see Alucard with Sir Integra. However almost all the romance stories (if Het) are about them. Really Seras and Alucard make a hell of a lot more sense. Anyway, I enjoyed your story and hope you continue! ^_^
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Title: onegai
Reviewed By: andyrose On: May 09, 2004 19:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
a lemon would be good here I think. Please continue :)
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Reviewed By: Eiri On: May 09, 2004 02:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ithought it was wounderful, I have found very few that are about alucard and seras. I thought it to be very creative.
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Reviewed By: Miscellaneous Penguin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 22:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovely fanfic, m'dear. Really loved the flow of it and the style. But...I'm not too sure about lemonizing. It seems too soon. I vote have a little more action come in (maybe Anderson could make an appearance? ^^). But if you do do the lemon, don't go too overboard with it, alrighty? :D
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