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Title: I.T.H.
Reviewed By: unamed On: April 02, 2005 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
FINISH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh bye the way I only put those in there beacuse I had to. It wouldn't let me put those in with out them.
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Title: I.T.H.
Reviewed By: unamed On: April 02, 2005 12:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! you should write one counting that one it would be so sweet Man! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: unamed On: March 27, 2005 18:21 CST
Comment/Review:
WARING SOME PREVIEW TALKING TO AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!! HEY author! I'm on chapter something or other. I know it's He's Lost It! I just got to the part where Alfeegi yelling at the lord, you might want to change it a little. It just sounds to much like a chant. But if it is a chant, than that's O.K., but i dout it is.
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Reviewed By: unnamed On: March 27, 2005 15:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm only on the 2nd chapter, and I just noticed something, you spelled 2 names wrong. The Dragon Queen's name is truly spelled Raseleane and her ade's name is spelled Cernozura. On another note I give the enjoyment factor a ten beacuse I'm only on the second chapter and I like it so far. I'm gonna stop now beacuse I'll just keep going on, and on, and on, and on, and on. I LLLLOOOOVVVVEEEE RATH!!!!He's HHHHOOOOTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: Wheehee!
Reviewed By: Sanjuno [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2004 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Ahh... I love this fic. It's helarious, and I love how Tetheus is completely in character by being out of character. It's great, and I love the way you've portrayed the rest of the characters. Is Rath Ruwalk's kid? Is that why he killed the fortune teller? Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. I wouldn't mind seeing more of Rath, Rune and Thatz either. Again, I love the fic! PLease keep up the good work! =^-^= mew! Ja ne!
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Title: Umm
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2004 19:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay. I'm gonna be a critic here. Um..I liked your ingration of Rath in this last chapter, but I didn't care for the 360 into the 70s thing. I'm sure you were trying to be funny, and some things about are, but the character changes throw me off.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 22:42 CDT
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Good, an update. ^^ And Cesia enters! Well, looking forward to the next update.
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 17:04 CDT
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'Of course. No man could write like that.' ^-^ That sentence just makes me very happy for some reason. Hehe...Tetheus? Boring? *laughs* I'm going to see him in a completely different light everytime I read a Dragon Knight book...
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Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2004 18:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
FASTER WITH THE FIC DANGIT! i wanna read! *sobs* (don't worry I'm okay ^^)
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2004 12:49 CDT
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Romance books? Ahh, makes sense. I know nothing about Dragoon. Sorry. Anyway, I like the chapter. ^-^
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Reviewed By: MILL [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2004 11:18 CDT
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Romance books! This gets better and better! Really. ^^ So...yeah Dragoon is actually a new thing for me too. It is a bit confusing but it worked out in your fic.
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Reviewed By: D&G On: June 02, 2004 09:16 CDT
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Yay, an update on the Tetheus fic! I love this fic, always worth the long gaps in between chapters.
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Reviewed By: Mill On: March 10, 2004 17:34 CST
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Thanks for the review! I keep coming back to this fic becasue its soo funny! Thanks for the tips too.
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Reviewed By: MILL On: March 04, 2004 18:16 CST
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Alright! I love both and can't wait to read them! If you could, would you leave a R&R Alternate and tell me what you think? ^^
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Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2004 13:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Well I deleted my YHH fic but I'm starting my own Dragon Knights one! When are you going to update?
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