Reviewed By: Whirlwind On: September 23, 2003 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Style of Writing: Your writing style was simple and comprehensive, although the paragraphs could be spaced out a bit for easier reading. Spelling and Grammar: If there were any spelling or grammar issues, they didn't stand out, nor did they interrupt the overall flow of the fic. Originality and Creativity: Some of the issues you incorporated have been used before (Hisoka/Tsuzuki, Muraki/Tsuzuki angst, etc.) but you handled them beautifully otherwise. Enjoyment Factor: There was enough plot twists throughout so the reader never really knew what was going to happen next, and that definately helps to rivet all available attention on the fic, considering the substantial length. The sub-plots were well meshed out and slowly built to the climax - a very impressive achievement. Overall Rating: I really enjoyed reading this fic, marathon as it was. The sheer length might overwhelm some readers looking for something shorter, but the rewards far outweigh the time necessary to read.
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