Title: Lovely
Reviewed By: HeartlessEnchantress On: September 10, 2003 14:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It saddens me to hear that was only a one-shot. It was a enchanting story. Your a great writer with an interesting writing style. You know how to twist your words so that the story sticks with you. I admire you for the way you portrayed kikiyo, you didn’t turn her into a bitch and gave reason to why she is so cold. It’s a wonderful thing when a writer can express a characters feelings in a way that doesn’t make them OOC. Especially with the less emotional personalities. Your truly gifted, perhaps you have a future as a writer?
-HeartlessEnchantress |
